Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且更准确地表达洗碗机的用途。

例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time washing dishes every day.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并准确表达节省时间和保持厨房整洁的观点。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort, and they help keep my kitchen clean and tidy.

提案: 回答有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连词使表达更自然。

例: To be honest, I don't read instructions for machines I'm familiar with, but I always read them when I use a new machine for the first time.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够准确。建议避免重复，使用正确的语法结构，并清晰表达阅读说明书的重要性。

例: I think it is very important to read the instructions when I'm not familiar with a machine because it helps avoid mistakes or damage.

× My favorite machine in my home definitely is a dishwasher because I'm putting every day so I have so many pants to wash.

✓ My favorite machine in my home definitely is a dishwasher because I use it every day so I have so many pants to wash.

句中 'I'm putting every day' 语法错误，应该用动词 'use' 来表达“我每天使用它”，'pants' 是复数形式，符合语境。

× Yes, I think they are so important because they can help me to save tons and efforts.

✓ Yes, I think they are so important because they can help me to save time and effort.

短语 'save tons and efforts' 不合适，应该用 'save time and effort' 来表达节省时间和精力。

× Also that time and tip my uh kitchen tidy all the time.

✓ Also, they help keep my kitchen tidy all the time.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，改为完整句子表达机器帮助保持厨房整洁。

× To be honest, for a machine I'm very familiar with, I do not read the instructions.

✓ To be honest, for a machine I am very familiar with, I do not read the instructions.

缩写形式 'I'm' 在正式表达中可以改为完整形式 'I am'，使句子更正式和清晰。

× But for a new machine, new machine that I. Do not use it before I will read the instructions.

✓ But for a new machine that I have not used before, I will read the instructions.

原句断句错误，缺少连贯性，改为完整句子表达未用过的新机器会阅读说明。

× I think it is very important to read the instructions if I'm not very familiar with the machines because reading reading the instructions can avoiding avoid any mistakes or damage.

✓ I think it is very important to read the instructions if I'm not very familiar with the machines because reading the instructions can avoid any mistakes or damage.

重复单词 'reading'，动词 'avoid' 使用错误，应该用原形动词 'avoid'，去掉多余的 'avoiding'。