Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“watching”应为“watch”，以及表达不够自然流畅。建议注意动词时态和冠词的使用，同时避免重复和口语填充词。可以尝试用更简洁且连贯的句子表达观点。

例: My favourite machine at home is the television. I usually watch it for two or three hours with my family because we enjoy music programs together. I think it's a great way to spend quality time with them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“washing machine can help people washing”应为“washing machine can help people wash”，且“swapping machine”应为“sweeping machine”。建议注意动词形式和词汇拼写，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make household chores easier. For example, a washing machine can clean items like down jackets that are hard to wash by hand, and a sweeping machine helps save time when cleaning floors.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“should put together by myself”应为“should be put together by myself”，“rate the introduction”应为“read the instructions”，“help me assembly”应为“help me assemble”。建议加强语法基础，注意被动语态和动词搭配。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For instance, last week I bought a chair that I had to assemble myself, so I carefully read the instructions to put it together correctly.

提案: 回答重复且不连贯，存在语法错误和口语填充词过多。建议避免重复内容，使用完整且连贯的句子表达观点，注意动词形式和冠词使用。

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important. For example, when I bought a chair last week that needed assembly, I carefully read the instructions to ensure I put it together properly.

× Definitely the television, I usually watching TV about two or three hours with my family because, uh, the some music programs are very attracted to me and I think that is a good way to spend quality time with my family.

✓ Definitely the television. I usually watch TV for about two or three hours with my family because, uh, some music programs are very attractive to me and I think that is a good way to spend quality time with my family.

动词后面接动名词形式时，通常需要助动词或正确的时态。这里“usually watching”应改为“usually watch”，因为“usually”表示习惯性动作，需用一般现在时。

× ...because, uh, the some music programs are very attracted to me...

✓ ...because, uh, some music programs are very attractive to me...

“the some”是错误的冠词搭配，应去掉“the”只用“some”。另外，“attracted to me”应改为“attractive to me”，因为“attracted”是被动含义，需用形容词“attractive”表示吸引人的。

× For example, washing machine can help people washing some difficult to clean by hand like down jacket and swapping machine can help people save time.

✓ For example, a washing machine can help people wash some things difficult to clean by hand like down jackets, and a sweeping machine can help people save time.

“help people washing”中“help”后应接动词原形“wash”，而非动名词“washing”。另外，“washing machine”前应加冠词“a”，且“down jacket”应为复数“down jackets”。“swapping machine”应为“sweeping machine”。

× For example, washing machine can help people washing some difficult to clean by hand like down jacket and swapping machine can help people save time.

✓ For example, a washing machine can help people wash some things difficult to clean by hand like down jackets, and a sweeping machine can help people save time.

名词前缺少冠词，应加不定冠词“a”。

× Sure, I think that is a very necessary step. For example, last week I bought a chair which should put together by myself.

✓ Sure, I think that is a very necessary step. For example, last week I bought a chair which I should put together by myself.

缺少主语“I”，导致句子结构不完整。

× So I must rate the introduction carefully to help me assembly the chair.

✓ So I must read the instructions carefully to help me assemble the chair.

“rate the introduction”用词错误，应为“read the instructions”。“assembly”应为动词“assemble”。

× Yes, I think it's a very important for example by myself, uh, last week I bought a chair, umm, which uh, should be put together by myself.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important. For example, last week I bought a chair which should be put together by myself.

“a very important”后缺少名词，应为“very important”。句子结构不清晰，建议分句表达。

× So I need to rate introduction very carefully.

✓ So I need to read the instructions very carefully.

“rate introduction”用词错误，应为“read the instructions”。