Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੇ ਗਏ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਿਰਫ਼ ਲੈਪਟਾਪ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਅਤੇ ਇਸਦੇ ਫਾਇਦੇ ਬਾਰੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਦੱਸੋ।

例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it for studying and completing history projects. It is very valuable to me every day.

提案: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਲੰਬਾਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਛੋਟਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਰੱਖੋ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤ ਕੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਜੋੜੋ।

例: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep our homes and clothes clean, which makes daily life easier.

提案: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਿੱਧਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਕਾਰਨ ਦੱਸੋ।

例: Yes, I always read the instructions the first time I use a machine because I am not familiar with it. Later, I remember how to use it.

提案: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਅਤੇ ਅਧੂਰੇ ਵਾਕ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਪੂਰਾ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਉਣ ਲਈ, ਸਿੱਧਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦਿਓ ਅਤੇ ਕਾਰਨ ਦੱਸੋ।

例: Yes, it is very important to read instructions because doing something wrong can cause big problems or even damage the machine.

× In my home my favorite machine is my laptop because I have to do study work on lap those laptop and I also create the some project letter to the history.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is my laptop because I have to do study work on that laptop and I also create some project letters for history.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'those laptop' instead of 'that laptop' and 'the some project letter' instead of 'some project letters'. 'Laptop' is singular, so 'that' is appropriate, and 'project letters' should be plural without 'the'.

× They are the valuable for me for every day.

✓ They are valuable to me every day.

The phrase 'the valuable' is incorrect; 'valuable' is an adjective and does not need 'the'. Also, 'for every day' should be 'every day' to indicate frequency.

× Definitely washing machines are sweeping machines are very important part in the housework because is those are really the daily juice at the every home because if our homes are not be clean and clothes are not be clean.

✓ Definitely, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important parts of housework because they are really used daily in every home. If our homes and clothes are not clean,

The sentence has plural and singular mismatches: 'washing machines are sweeping machines are very important part' should be 'washing machines and sweeping machines are very important parts'. Also, 'is those are' is incorrect; it should be 'they are'. 'Daily juice' is likely a mishearing or error; 'used daily' fits better.

× So if person have to face the difficulty in the regular life.

✓ So if a person has to face difficulties in regular life.

'Have' should be 'has' for singular 'person' (subject-verb agreement). 'Difficulty' should be plural 'difficulties' to generalize. 'The regular life' should be 'regular life' without 'the'.

× Absolutely I read the follow instructions if I have to do the any machines in the first time because that time I will not to know about the that machines.

✓ Absolutely, I read the instructions if I have to use any machine for the first time because at that time I will not know about that machine.

'Have to do the any machines' is incorrect; it should be 'have to use any machine'. 'Will not to know' is incorrect; 'will not know' is correct. 'The follow instructions' should be 'the instructions'.

× But if I have to use the sometime then I have to remember all things in my mind I have to use.

✓ But if I have to use it sometimes, then I remember everything in my mind that I need to use.

'Have to use the sometime' is incorrect; 'use it sometimes' is correct. 'I have to remember all things in my mind I have to use' is awkward; better to say 'I remember everything in my mind that I need to use'.

× Definitely it is very important to read the full extensions full of intentions 'cause if person have to do any wrong things so they can create the big problem in front of us, sometime they have to totally damage of the article, so it's.

✓ Definitely, it is very important to read the full instructions because if a person does anything wrong, it can create big problems for us. Sometimes, it can totally damage the item.

'Full extensions full of intentions' is incorrect; it should be 'full instructions'. 'If person have to do any wrong things' should be 'if a person does anything wrong'. 'They can create the big problem in front of us' is awkward; better 'it can create big problems for us'. 'Sometime they have to totally damage of the article' is incorrect; 'Sometimes, it can totally damage the item' is correct.