Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有語言錯誤，例如「sell」應為「use」，以及「flour」應為「floor」。建議你在回答時注意單字的正確使用，並且可以多加描述吸塵器的功能，使回答更完整。

例: My favourite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me clean the floor quickly and efficiently.

提案: 你的回答表達了觀點，但內容較為簡單且缺乏具體細節。建議你可以加入更多具體原因或例子，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

例: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort. For example, washing machines can clean clothes thoroughly, and sweeping machines help keep the floor tidy without much manual work.

提案: 你的回答有些語法錯誤，且句子結構不夠清晰。建議你使用更自然的句型，並注意動詞和代詞的搭配，使表達更流暢。

例: Actually, I usually don't read the instructions because I already know how to use most machines. However, if the machine is a new model, I probably will read the manual to understand how it works.

提案: 你的回答中有許多語氣詞和重複，影響流暢度。建議你練習使用更簡潔且結構完整的句子，並避免使用過多的填充詞。

例: I think it depends. If we are familiar with the machine, reading instructions may not be necessary. However, for new machines, I recommend reading the manual to use them properly.

× I like to sell the vacuum because it can help me clean my flour.

✓ I like to use the vacuum because it can help me clean my floor.

The student used 'sell' instead of 'use', which is incorrect in this context. Also, 'flour' (a powder used in cooking) is incorrect; the correct word is 'floor' (the surface of a room). The verb 'use' fits the intended meaning of operating the machine.

× Actually I don't, because most of the machines we usually know how to use them.

✓ Actually I don't, because we usually know how to use most of the machines.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'we' and 'them' which cause confusion. Removing 'them' and rearranging the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But if the version of the machine is too new, I probably will check it on the introduction.

✓ But if the version of the machine is too new, I will probably check the instructions.

The phrase 'check it on the introduction' is incorrect. The correct preposition is omitted and 'introduction' should be 'instructions' to refer to the manual or guide. Also, 'will probably' is a better word order.

× So in that situation, I, I don't think we need to, uh, see the instruction, but if not, I recommend it to that way.

✓ So in that situation, I don't think we need to see the instructions, but if not, I recommend doing so.

'See the instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The phrase 'recommend it to that way' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'recommend doing so' to refer back to reading instructions. This improves grammatical correctness and clarity.