Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏语法正确性和连贯性，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习使用简单明了的句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持观点。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly and efficiently. It saves me a lot of time compared to washing by hand, and I can wash different items like socks and boots easily.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用正确的语法结构，增加连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important for every family because they make cleaning easier and faster. For example, they help reduce the workload for housekeepers or family members, allowing them to save time and effort.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏逻辑性。建议练习用简洁明了的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid mistakes. Instructions also provide important details that can prevent damage to the machine.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且重复。建议使用简单句表达观点，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because if you don't, the machine might get damaged easily. Following the instructions helps to use the machine properly and avoid frequent repairs or replacements.

× I prefer washing machine in my home is my interesting thing.

✓ I prefer the washing machine in my home; it is my interesting thing.

这里缺少冠词“the”，并且“washing machine”是单数，前面需要冠词修饰。

× I'm on my home as it's noticed that my washing machine was always wash my socks or boots or clothes anytime and I think this because my washing machine can allow me to clean.

✓ At my home, I have noticed that my washing machine always washes my socks, boots, or clothes anytime, and I think this is because my washing machine allows me to clean.

句子结构混乱，时态和主谓不一致，需要调整语序和动词形式，使句子通顺。

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

此句无错误，复数形式使用正确。

× Well, of course it's very important for every family us knowing that washing machine and strapping machines both are very convenient for people to clean with their house.

✓ Well, of course it's very important for every family to know that washing machines and sweeping machines are both very convenient for people to clean their houses.

“us knowing”用法错误，应使用不定式“to know”；“strapping”应为“sweeping”；“washing machine”应为复数形式“washing machines”；“with their house”应为“their houses”。

× And also this can more beneficial for the household works for the maids or even for mom or someone else.

✓ Also, this can be more beneficial for household work for the maids or even for mom or someone else.

“household works”应为不可数名词“household work”；“can more beneficial”缺少动词“be”。

× Yeah, of course, because is this fact that and and machine is needed to and required to learn every skills within of it and destructions will maybe there are some umm distraction or other detail you need to concentrate with it.

✓ Yeah, of course, because it is a fact that a machine needs you to learn every skill related to it, and the instructions may contain some distractions or other details you need to concentrate on.

“is needed to and required to learn”表达不当，应简化为“needs you to learn”；“every skills”应为“every skill”；“destructions”应为“instructions”；“concentrate with”应为“concentrate on”。

× Of course I believe that every machines need to follow the instructions amount of it, because it can easily to get broken or something and annoying for the daily and light washing machine.

✓ Of course, I believe that every machine needs to follow the instructions carefully, because it can easily get broken or cause problems, which is annoying for daily use of the washing machine.

“every machines”应为“every machine”；“need to follow the instructions amount of it”表达不清，应改为“needs to follow the instructions carefully”；“can easily to get broken”应为“can easily get broken”。

× Maybe you don't follow the instructions you easily to broken and you need to repair again and again or purchase a new one.

✓ If you don't follow the instructions, you can easily break it and need to repair it again and again or purchase a new one.

“you easily to broken”语法错误，应为“you can easily break it”；缺少连词“if”；动词形式错误。