Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有冗余。建议注意时态一致，句子简洁，避免重复表达。

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. For example, after taking a shower, I can simply put my dirty clothes into the washing machine and start it by pressing a button.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并补充完整细节。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our fast-paced society because they save a lot of time and effort. For example, these machines help us reduce household chores, so we can focus more on our work and spend quality time with our family.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和表达不准确。建议注意主谓一致和用词准确，避免口语化填充词。

例: Actually, I seldom read instructions before using a machine because I find most devices quite straightforward to operate. For example, when I use a coffee maker, I just press a few buttons and it works perfectly.

提案: 回答中重复和语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Actually, it depends on how complicated the machine is. If the machine is complicated, I usually read the instructions to avoid mistakes. But if it is straightforward, I don't think it's necessary.

× My favorite machine at home is washing machine because it's very convenient and save a lot of time.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it's very convenient and saves a lot of time.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，并且主语是单数第三人称，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“saves”。

× For example, after I take a shower, I can Simply put my dirty clothes into the washing machine and started just press the button so.

✓ For example, after I take a shower, I can simply put my dirty clothes into the washing machine and just press the button to start it.

“started”用法错误，应使用不定式或动词原形“start”来表达动作的开始。句子结构混乱，需要调整顺序使其通顺。

× Yes, I think these machines are very important in our fast-paced society because it can save a lot of time and efforts.

✓ Yes, I think these machines are very important in our fast-paced society because they can save a lot of time and effort.

主语“these machines”是复数，谓语和代词应使用复数形式“they”。“efforts”通常用不可数形式“effort”表示抽象概念。

× For example, on this machines help us reduce household chores so we can focus on our work and spend more time with.

✓ For example, these machines help us reduce household chores so we can focus on our work and spend more time with family.

“on this machines”错误，应为“these machines”。句子末尾缺少宾语，需补充完整。

× Actually, I seldom read instructions before you sell machine because I found most devices quite straightforward to operate.

✓ Actually, I seldom read instructions before using a machine because I find most devices quite straightforward to operate.

“you sell machine”不合适，应改为“using a machine”。时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时“find”。

× Actually it depends on how how complicated the machine is. I mean, if the machine is complicated, I might I might read the menu to avoid mistakes. But if the machine are very are very straightforward too.

✓ Actually, it depends on how complicated the machine is. I mean, if the machine is complicated, I might read the manual to avoid mistakes. But if the machine is very straightforward too.

重复词“how how”应去掉。应使用“manual”而非“menu”。主语“machine”是单数，谓语动词应为“is”。