Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免开头的“Filter machine”与后文内容不符，且表达应更自然流畅。建议直接回答喜欢的机器，并用连词连接理由，避免口语化词汇如“you know”。

例: My favorite machine at home is the computer because it plays a vital role in both my studies and entertainment. For example, I can watch educational videos and play games on it, which makes my daily life more enjoyable and productive.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达中有语法错误，如“save us so many time”应为“save us a lot of time”。建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time on household chores. Consequently, we can spend more time relaxing or focusing on our studies.

提案: 回答较自然，但“hardly ever”后应加完整句子，且“in the mobile phone or computers”表达不准确。建议改为“on my phone or computer”。

例: No, I hardly ever read the instructions. Instead, I prefer watching instructional videos on my phone or computer because they help me learn how to use the machine correctly and efficiently, saving time for other activities.

提案: 表达中存在语法和用词错误，如“do the right produce”应为“follow the correct procedure”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions to use the machine properly. Otherwise, incorrect use might cause the machine to break down, leading to costly repairs.

× I think I would choose the computer as my favorite machine in my home because it's so important for me about my studies and recreation, you know, and I can add the videos or other things in it.

✓ I think I would choose the computer as my favorite machine in my home because it's so important for me for my studies and recreation, you know, and I can add videos or other things to it.

介词使用错误。'important for me about my studies' 应改为 'important for me for my studies'，表示对学习重要。'add the videos or other things in it' 应改为 'add videos or other things to it'，因为动词 'add' 后面通常接 'to' 表示添加到某物中。

× Yes I do. I think they are so important for our lives since they can save us so many time to clean and wash.

✓ Yes I do. I think they are so important for our lives since they can save us so much time to clean and wash.

不可数名词 'time' 前不能用 'many'，应使用 'much'。

× In this way I can learn how to use the machine correctly, efficiently and it can save my time to do other things.

✓ In this way I can learn how to use the machine correctly and efficiently, and it can save my time to do other things.

连接词使用不当，'correctly, efficiently and it can save' 应改为 'correctly and efficiently, and it can save'，使句子结构更清晰。

× Yes, I think it's so important to learn how to use the machine correctly, since if you don't do the right produce you would make the machine break down and then you need to pay for it about the damage.

✓ Yes, I think it's so important to learn how to use the machine correctly, since if you don't do the right procedure you would make the machine break down and then you need to pay for the damage.

单词错误，'produce' 应为 'procedure'，表示正确的操作步骤。'pay for it about the damage' 结构不正确，应改为 'pay for the damage'。