Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免拼写错误和不准确的词汇使用。可以适当使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort by automatically cleaning my clothes. For example, after a long day, instead of hand washing, I can simply load the machine and focus on other tasks.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“doing lottery”应为“doing laundry”，且句子表达不够清晰。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households because they save a significant amount of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually. For example, washing machines ensure clothes are cleaned efficiently.

提案: 回答较为完整且表达清晰，但“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，建议注意名词单复数形式的正确使用。

例: Of course, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it's new or complicated. For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully followed the manual to ensure I used it correctly and avoided any damage.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“completed a task”应为“complete a task”，“accessible in furniture”表达不准确。建议加强语法和词汇的准确性，表达更具体。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully because they provide essential information on how to use a product or complete a task correctly. This helps prevent mistakes and accidents, for example when assembling furniture or using electronic devices.

× Yeah, my favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine assumed a lot of time and effort by automatically cleaning my clothes, which is especially half have after a long day.

✓ Yeah, my favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine, saving a lot of time and effort by automatically cleaning my clothes, which is especially helpful after a long day.

原句中“assumed a lot of time and effort”用词错误，应使用现在分词形式“saving”表示洗衣机节省时间和精力。此处需要用动词的现在分词形式来表达正在进行的动作或状态。

× For example, instead of hand washing I can simply load the machine and focus on other task.

✓ For example, instead of hand washing I can simply load the machine and focus on other tasks.

“other task”中的“task”应为复数形式“tasks”，因为“other”后面通常接复数名词，表示其他的多个任务。

× Yes, of course. I believe washing machine and sweeping machines are very important in modern households.

✓ Yes, of course. I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households.

“washing machine”应使用复数形式“washing machines”，因为后文提到的是多台机器，与“sweeping machines”保持一致。

× They see a significant amount of time and efforts compared to doing lottery or a cleaning man manually.

✓ They save a significant amount of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually.

“see a significant amount of time and efforts”表达错误，应为“save a significant amount of time and effort”，且“effort”不可数，使用单数形式；“doing lottery”应为“doing laundry”；“a cleaning man manually”表达不当，应改为“cleaning manually”。

× For example, washing machines ensures clothes are cleaned.

✓ For example, washing machines ensure clothes are cleaned.

主语“washing machines”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“ensure”，而非单数“ensures”。

× Of course, I usually read the instruction before using the machine, especially if it's something new or complicated.

✓ Of course, I usually read the instructions before using the machine, especially if it's something new or complicated.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，因为通常指多条使用说明。

× For example, when I brought a new coffee maker, I carefully followed the manual to ensure I use it correctly and avoid any damage.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully followed the manual to ensure I used it correctly and avoided any damage.

“brought”应为“bought”，表示购买；时态应保持一致，使用过去时“used”和“avoided”，因为动作发生在过去。

× Instructions provide the essential information on how to use the product or completed a task correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents, for example when accessible in furniture or using elective device.

✓ Instructions provide the essential information on how to use the product or complete a task correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents, for example when assembling furniture or using electronic devices.

“completed”应为动词原形“complete”，因为前面是“how to”结构；“accessible in furniture”表达错误，应为“assembling furniture”；“elective device”应为“electronic device”。