Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên và chính xác ngữ pháp: trả lời nên dùng thì nhất quán (ví dụ: "helps" thay vì "helped") và mở rộng thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh câu quá ngắn, nhưng vẫn không quá dài (không quá 5 câu).

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps my room comfortable all year round. For example, in winter it warms the room quickly, and in summer it cools the air so I can sleep well.

提案: Cải thiện tính chính xác và cụ thể: tránh lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (ví dụ "watch the dishes" sai — nên là "wash the clothes/dishes by hand"). Thêm lý do cụ thể và 1 ví dụ ngắn, dùng liên từ để liên kết ý. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think they are essential because they save a lot of time and effort. For instance, a washing machine cleans clothes faster than hand-washing, and a vacuum saves energy when cleaning large rooms.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và logic: câu hiện tại lặp từ và sai mạo từ. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn vì sao, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ nói về thói quen và một ngoại lệ nếu có.

例: No, I usually don't read instructions and tend to try new machines immediately because I prefer learning by doing. However, if the device looks complicated, I sometimes check the manual first.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cụm từ chính xác: dùng số nhiều/đếm được (instructions), tránh lặp và sửa cấu trúc ("before using any machine"). Nên nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể (an toàn, bảo quản) và dùng từ liên kết để rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it helps you use the machine safely and avoid damage. For example, following the manual can prevent electrical hazards and extend the device's lifespan.

× My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner. It helped me keep warm in winter.

✓ My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner. It helps me stay warm in winter.

The second sentence uses past tense 'helped' but the context is about a general, habitual fact, so present simple 'helps' is required. Use 'stay' rather than 'keep' for natural collocation: 'helps me stay warm'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual/general truths and choose collocations that native speakers prefer.

× Without washing machine, people have to watch the dishes by hand and I think this is not.

✓ Without a washing machine, people have to wash the dishes by hand, and I think this is not good.

Missing article 'a' before 'washing machine' (indefinite singular noun). 'Watch the dishes' is incorrect collocation; correct verb is 'wash the dishes'. The clause 'I think this is not' is incomplete; add adjective 'good' or rephrase. Suggestion: include appropriate articles ('a'/'the') and use correct verbs and complete evaluative clauses.

× No, I have never read any instructions before using a machine when whenever I have a new machine I use them instantly right away.

✓ No, I have never read any instructions before using a machine. Whenever I get a new machine, I use it right away.

Run-on sentence and incorrect combination of tenses/phrases. Use 'Whenever I get' for present habitual with new acquisitions. 'Read any instructions before using' is fine but separate sentences improve clarity. 'Them' is wrong for singular 'a new machine' — use 'it'. Remove redundant 'instantly' with 'right away'. Suggestion: split into two sentences, maintain subject-verb agreement and consistent pronouns.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instruction before you read any machinery.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before you use any machine.

Countable nouns need correct number and article: 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' or 'the instruction'. 'Read any machinery' is wrong: we 'use' machinery or 'read the manual' for a machine. 'Machine' singular fits with 'any'. Suggestion: use 'instructions' and pair verbs appropriately with nouns (read instructions, use a machine).

× People when read instruction, we know how to use it in a properly way.

✓ When people read instructions, they know how to use them properly.

Mixed subjects 'People' and 'we' causes inconsistency; use third-person plural pronoun 'they' to match 'people'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and 'it' should agree in number -> 'them'. 'In a properly way' is incorrect adverb/adjective order; use 'properly' (adverb) after verb. Suggestion: keep subject consistent, match pronouns in number, and use correct adverb form and placement.