Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达重复且不够具体。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can still recall many details about my childhood friends and the activities we did together.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用具体情境说明忘记的重要事情。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot about a class I was supposed to attend, even though I had reminded my teacher.

提案: 回答结构简单，语法和表达有待改进。建议使用连贯的句子，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks for the day, the items I should bring with me, and the places I need to visit.

提案: 语法错误明显，表达不流畅。建议使用正确时态，清晰描述记忆方法，并使用连接词。

例: To remember important things, I usually ask my mom to remind me, and I also write notes or set reminders on my phone.

× I will say yes because I can remember a lot of things in my childhood.

✓ I would say yes because I could remember a lot of things in my childhood.

这里的时态应该是过去时，因为谈论的是童年时期的记忆。'will say'和'can remember'不符合时间背景，应该用过去时态表达。

× For instance, I can remember my friends when I was little and some sometimes we do a lot of things that I can remember.

✓ For instance, I can remember my friends when I was little, and sometimes we did a lot of things that I can remember.

句子结构混乱，'some sometimes'重复且不合适，且后半句时态不一致，应调整为过去时'did'，使句子通顺。

× Yeah, sometimes I call to teacher that one day I will have a class, but I maybe forget it sometimes.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I call the teacher to say that one day I will have a class, but I may forget it sometimes.

动词'call'后不需要介词'to'，应直接接宾语'the teacher'。另外，'maybe'用作副词时应为'may'加动词原形。

× I need to remember what should I do today.

✓ I need to remember what I should do today.

间接疑问句中，语序应为陈述语序，不能使用直接疑问句的倒装语序。

× And uh, what item should I bring?

✓ And uh, what items should I bring?

这里应使用复数形式'items'，因为通常带的物品不止一件。

× Also I need to remember where will I go?

✓ Also I need to remember where I will go.

间接疑问句中，语序应为陈述语序，不能使用直接疑问句的倒装语序。

× I will told my mom that she too, uh, told me when I need to do this thing and also I will write it down or put it in my phone.

✓ I will tell my mom that she, too, uh, tells me when I need to do this thing, and also I will write it down or put it in my phone.

'will told'是错误的时态搭配，'will'后应接动词原形'tell'。另外，'she too told me'时态应与上下文一致，改为现在时'tells'更合适。