Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неясные выражения, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, чтобы ясно выразить мысль. Также избегайте избыточности и старайтесь быть более конкретным.

例: Actually, I am not very good at memorising things. I often forget what I have learned or where I put my belongings.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные выражения, чтобы ответ был понятен и логичен.

例: Yes, I have forgotten some important English lessons during exams because my memory is not very strong.

提案: Ответ понятен, но содержит повторения и небольшие ошибки. Рекомендуется избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова для улучшения связности речи.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my vitamins every day because they help improve my health.

提案: Ответ достаточно полный, но есть грамматические ошибки и неясные выражения. Рекомендуется улучшить грамматику и использовать более точные слова для ясности.

例: I usually write important things in my notebook or notes on my phone. It helps me stay organized. I also set alarms to remind me of important tasks, especially when I have deadlines. This makes it easier for me to remember everything without feeling stressed.

× Actually, I don't enough without memorizing things.

✓ Actually, I can't remember enough without memorizing things.

The original sentence lacks a modal verb to express ability or possibility. 'Don't enough' is incorrect; the correct modal verb here is 'can't' to indicate inability to remember without memorizing.

× I usually forget my things, what I live it and what I learn about subjects.

✓ I usually forget my things, what I live, and what I learn about subjects.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect after 'what I live'. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I forget what I learned about English in important exam and so I don't have a good memorizing.

✓ Yes, I forgot what I learned about English in an important exam, so I don't have good memory.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past event. Also, 'an important exam' requires an article, and 'memorizing' is incorrectly used; 'memory' is the correct noun here.

× In my daily life I need to remember my vitamins which I which I must eat every day so it helps me to improve my health.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my vitamins which I must take every day because they help me improve my health.

The verb 'eat' is incorrect for vitamins; 'take' is the correct verb. Also, 'so it helps me to improve' is better expressed as 'because they help me improve' for clarity and correctness.

× I usually write important things in my notebook or notice in my phone.

✓ I usually write important things in my notebook or notes on my phone.

'Notice' is incorrect; the correct word is 'notes'. Also, the preposition 'on' is used with 'phone' instead of 'in'.

× It helps me stay organized and I also set alarms to remind me about important tasks, especially when I have the lines.

✓ It helps me stay organized and I also set alarms to remind me of important tasks, especially when I have deadlines.

The phrase 'remind me about' is better as 'remind me of'. Also, 'lines' is incorrect; the intended word is 'deadlines'.

× This makes make it easily for me to remember everything without feeling stressed.

✓ This makes it easy for me to remember everything without feeling stressed.

The phrase 'makes make it easily' is incorrect and redundant. The correct structure is 'makes it easy' with 'easy' as an adjective, not 'easily' which is an adverb.