Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免使用不恰当的词汇，如“married things”，并且保持回答简洁自然。

例: Yes, I think I am good at memorizing things because I often use repetition to remember important information.

提案: 时态使用不准确，且表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致性，使用简单明了的句子表达经历。

例: Yes, I forgot to bring my mobile phone to the library yesterday, so I couldn't enroll in the school project I wanted to join.

提案: 句子结构混乱，有重复和语法错误。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I need to remember important things like my teaching schedule because I am a teacher. Besides that, I also try to remember to exercise regularly since I want to lose weight.

提案: 表达不清晰，词汇使用错误，句子不连贯。建议使用简单句，明确表达记忆方法，并避免重复和错误用词。

例: I usually take notes on a memorizing app. Also, I ask my friends and parents to remind me, so I don't forget important things.

× I always married things actually as well as.

✓ I always memorize things actually as well.

这里'married'是动词的过去式，意思是结婚，显然不符合语境。正确的动词应该是'memorize'，表示记忆。动词后面需要用动词原形或-ing形式，这里用原形'memorize'更合适。

× Yesterday I have forgot to bring my mobile phone to the library and I cannot enroll in the school project I will do.

✓ Yesterday I forgot to bring my mobile phone to the library and I could not enroll in the school project I was going to do.

这里时间状语是'yesterday'，表示过去时间，应该用一般过去时。'have forgot'是不正确的，正确形式是'forgot'。另外，后半句时态也应与过去时间一致，'cannot'改为'could not'，'will do'改为'was going to do'。

× Maybe something most important such as the the teaching schedule since I'm a teacher and besides that went to do exercise since I'm an overweight person who need to lose some weight.

✓ Maybe something most important such as the teaching schedule since I'm a teacher and besides that, I go to do exercise since I'm an overweight person who needs to lose some weight.

句中'the the'重复使用定冠词，应去掉一个。'went to do exercise'时态不对，应改为一般现在时'go to do exercise'，因为是习惯动作。'who need'主语是单数，动词应加-s，改为'who needs'。

× I will admit my friends and my my parents to supervise me. I always keep in touch with me to help me remember important things.

✓ I will ask my friends and my parents to supervise me. I always keep in touch with them to help me remember important things.

'admit'用错，应该用'ask'表示请求。'my my'重复，应去掉一个。'keep in touch with me'中的'with me'错误，应该是'with them'，因为是和朋友和父母保持联系。