Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“memories”应为“memorizing”，以及“return the information”表达不准确。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, when I read a new book, I focus on the key points and important details, which helps me recall the information better. This method makes it easier for me to remember what I have learned.

提案: 你的回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，如“therefore”或“as a result”。此外，表达“felt very sorry”可以更自然地说成“felt very sorry about it”或“felt really bad”。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, when I was in high school, I had an exam on Friday, but I mistakenly thought it was Saturday, so I missed it. As a result, my family was very disappointed, and I felt really bad about it.

提案: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“remember in real vocabulary”不明确，且“narrate English words”用词不当。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构，使内容更连贯自然。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to study English regularly, especially for upcoming exams. For example, I focus on learning new vocabulary because it helps me improve my speaking and writing skills. Therefore, I try to review and practice English words every day to prepare well.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法和拼写错误，如“Muppets”应为“methods”，“Whiting”应为“writing”，“city remains”表达不明。建议加强基础词汇和语法学习，使用正确的单词和表达方式，使回答更清晰自然。

例: I usually use different methods to remember important things, such as writing them down on notes or setting reminders on my phone. I always make sure to remember birthdays and exam details. Among them, my parents' birthdays are the most important to me because they are the closest and most significant people.

× Yes, I am quite good at memories.

✓ Yes, I am quite good at memorising things.

这里'memories'是名词复数形式，但句子中需要动名词形式'memorising'来表示记忆的能力。应使用动名词形式来表达擅长做某事。

× which helps me return the information better.

✓ which helps me remember the information better.

动词'return'意思是归还，不符合语境。此处应使用'remember'表示记住信息。

× I remember in real vocabulary.

✓ I remember real vocabulary.

短语中'in'使用不当，'remember'后直接接宾语即可，无需介词。

× I usually use different Muppets to remember the important things such as Whiting them down on city remains on my phone for example.

✓ I usually use different methods to remember important things, such as writing them down on sticky notes or on my phone, for example.

原句中'Muppets'应为'methods'，'Whiting'应为'writing'，'city remains'应为'sticky notes'或类似表达。且句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Among them, my parents birthday are the most important to me because they are the closest and most significant people.

✓ Among them, my parents' birthdays are the most important to me because they are the closest and most significant people.

'parents'是复数，所有格应为'parents''，'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，表示父母的生日。