Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: आपके उत्तर में बहुत सारे 'uh' और 'um' जैसे filler शब्द हैं, जो आपकी बात को कम प्राकृतिक और प्रभावी बनाते हैं। आपको अपने उत्तर को संक्षिप्त और स्पष्ट बनाना चाहिए, और अनावश्यक पुनरावृत्ति से बचना चाहिए।

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing important details like birthdays and phone numbers of my family members. However, I sometimes rely on my phone to save other contacts, and occasionally I forget some dates because I don't always set reminders properly. Overall, I think my memory is fairly reliable, but technology helps me a lot.

提案: आपका उत्तर अच्छा है लेकिन आप कुछ लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग कर सकते हैं ताकि उत्तर और अधिक प्रवाहपूर्ण और तार्किक लगे।

例: Yes, I once forgot my parents' wedding anniversary, which was very important to me. I felt terrible because it is a special day for our family and I didn't want to disappoint them. Fortunately, my sister reminded me just in time, so I quickly apologized and then set reminders on my phone to ensure I wouldn't forget again.

提案: आपके उत्तर में कुछ व्याकरण की गलतियाँ हैं जैसे 'managing my task' और 'attending a work meetings'। आपको व्याकरण पर ध्यान देना चाहिए और अपने उत्तर को और अधिक सटीक बनाना चाहिए।

例: In my daily life, I need to remember several important things such as managing my tasks, attending work meetings, and handling emails on time. I also make sure to keep my phone and personal belongings with me to avoid any inconvenience. Additionally, I often remind myself to buy essential items for my home, like groceries or household supplies, so everything runs smoothly.

提案: आपका उत्तर अच्छा है लेकिन आप कुछ और विविध शब्दावली का उपयोग कर सकते हैं और लिंकिंग शब्दों को जोड़कर उत्तर को और अधिक प्रभावी बना सकते हैं।

例: I remember important things in two main ways. Firstly, I make detailed notes and keep them in front of me so I can quickly review them whenever needed. Moreover, since smartphones are widely available and very convenient, I use note-taking applications to set reminders, which helps me stay organized every day.

× I sometimes rely on my phone to save other contact details and occasionally I forgot forget some birth dates because I don't always set reminders properly.

✓ I sometimes rely on my phone to save other contact details and occasionally I forget some birth dates because I don't always set reminders properly.

यहाँ 'forgot forget' में 'forgot' गलत रूप में उपयोग हुआ है क्योंकि वाक्य वर्तमान काल में है। 'Forget' का वर्तमान काल रूप सही है। इसलिए 'forgot' को हटा कर 'forget' रखना चाहिए।

× In my daily life, I need to remember several important things such as managing my task, attending a work meetings, and handling emails on time.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember several important things such as managing my tasks, attending work meetings, and handling emails on time.

यहाँ 'task' और 'meetings' के साथ संख्या मेल नहीं खा रही है। 'Several important things' के लिए बहुवचन 'tasks' और 'work meetings' (बिना 'a') सही होगा। इसलिए 'task' को 'tasks' और 'a work meetings' को 'work meetings' करना चाहिए।

× Also, since smartphones are widely available and very convenient, I use note taking application to set reminders which helps me stay organized every day.

✓ Also, since smartphones are widely available and very convenient, I use a note-taking application to set reminders which helps me stay organized every day.

यहाँ 'note taking application' के पहले 'a' आर्टिकल की आवश्यकता है क्योंकि यह एक गिनती योग्य संज्ञा है। साथ ही 'note taking' को 'note-taking' हाइफ़न के साथ लिखना चाहिए। इसलिए 'use note taking application' को 'use a note-taking application' करना चाहिए।