Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolaylı anlatımlardan kaçının. Ayrıca, cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırın ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I or my friends have said. This makes it hard for me to remember conversations clearly.

提案: Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla destekleyerek geliştirin. Ayrıca, detayları daha spesifik ve anlamlı hale getirin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dilbilgisi hatalarını azaltın.

例: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday when I was 12. She was a bit sad, but she didn't show too much disappointment, which made me feel relieved.

提案: Cümlenizi daha net ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ve daha spesifik detaylar ekleyin.

例: I need to remember to lock the doors and unplug chargers at home because I often forget these important tasks, which can be risky.

提案: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için gereksiz duraklamalardan kaçının. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayarak daha tutarlı hale getirin ve detayları biraz daha genişletin.

例: I use an agenda to write down important things, so I don't forget them. This method helps me stay organized and remember my tasks effectively.

× No, I'm not really good actually about memorizing things 'cause I'm, uh, I am forgetting everything that I said or my friend said to me.

✓ No, I'm not really good at memorizing things because I forget everything that I or my friend said to me.

The phrase 'good about memorizing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at'. Also, 'I am forgetting' is not appropriate here; simple present 'I forget' fits better to express a habitual action.

× Yeah, I did, uh, forget my mom's birthday when I was 12 because that I was 12 years old.

✓ Yeah, I forgot my mom's birthday when I was 12 because I was 12 years old.

The phrase 'I did forget' is unnecessary here; simple past 'I forgot' is sufficient. Also, 'because that I was 12 years old' is awkward; 'because I was 12 years old' is correct.

× My mom was sad about it, but never said too much disappointed at me.

✓ My mom was sad about it, but never said she was too disappointed in me.

The phrase 'said too much disappointed at me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'said she was too disappointed in me'.

× I need to remember of course locking the doors because I am keep getting forgetting locking the doors and I have to unplug the chargers at home so I don't not I am not really good about the Remember Remember.

✓ I need to remember, of course, to lock the doors because I keep forgetting to lock them, and I have to unplug the chargers at home, so I'm not really good at remembering.

The phrase 'remember of course locking the doors' is incorrect; it should be 'remember to lock the doors'. 'I am keep getting forgetting' is incorrect; correct form is 'I keep forgetting'. Also, 'good about the Remember Remember' is incorrect; correct is 'good at remembering'.

× I have a agenda, so I don't, uh, forget anything.

✓ I have an agenda, so I don't forget anything.

The article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'agenda' should be 'an'.

× I am writing when I have to remember things on that agenda, so I don't forget them.

✓ I write down when I have to remember things in that agenda, so I don't forget them.

The phrase 'I am writing when I have to remember things on that agenda' is awkward. The correct expression is 'I write down when I have to remember things in that agenda'.