Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I have a good comment of memorizing things”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things such as storybooks, words, and sentences because I practiced a lot during my childhood.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“shopping shops”不明确，且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地描述经历，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

例: Yes, I have. For example, during a summer vacation at the beach, I lost my purse, which was quite expensive.

提案: 回答中有词汇使用错误，如“stairs of law”应为“areas of law”或“sections of law”。建议使用准确的词汇，并且句子结构更清晰。

例: As a law student, I need to remember many legal cases and different areas of law, which helps me improve my memorising skills.

提案: 回答中有发音错误和语法错误，如“qua tough question”和“Wanna have to memorize”不合适。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰，并避免口语化错误。

例: That's a tough question. When I need to memorise difficult things, I usually read them several times, which helps improve my memory and allows me to recall the information better.

× Yes, of course I'm have a good comment of memorizing things like storybooks or words or sentences.

✓ Yes, of course I have a good command of memorizing things like storybooks or words or sentences.

句中“I'm have”是错误的动词形式，应为“I have”。此外，“comment”应为“command”，表示“掌握”。这是动词形式和词汇使用错误。

× Although I'm good at memorizing, I still had a experience of losing something when I went to the beach to have a summer vacation.

✓ Although I'm good at memorizing, I still had an experience of losing something when I went to the beach to have a summer vacation.

“a experience”中的冠词使用错误，应为“an experience”，因为“experience”以元音音素开头。

× I lost my purse and, uh, shopping shops and it's really expensive purse.

✓ I lost my purse at the shopping mall, and it's a really expensive purse.

“shopping shops”表达不准确，应为“shopping mall”或“shops”。此外，连接词和句子结构需要调整，使句子更通顺。

× As a law student, I'm in great need of memorizing a lot of law legal cases and many stairs of law, but I think it can really help me improve my memorizing ability.

✓ As a law student, I need to memorize a lot of legal cases and many statutes of law, but I think it can really help me improve my memorizing ability.

“in great need of memorizing”表达不自然，改为“need to memorize”更合适。“law legal cases”词序错误，应为“legal cases”。“stairs of law”应为“statutes of law”，词汇错误。

× That's a qua tough question. Wanna have to memorize difficult things.

✓ That's a quite tough question. I have to memorize difficult things.

“qua”应为“quite”，拼写错误。“Wanna have to”结构错误，应为“I have to”。句子结构不完整，需调整。

× I usually read these things for several times and I think it can facilitate my memory and help me recite these words better.

✓ I usually read these things several times and I think it can facilitate my memory and help me recite these words better.

“read these things for several times”中“for”多余，应去掉。正确表达为“read these things several times”。