Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“could meet always memorize everything”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I think I'm quite good at memorising things because I always use Google Calendar to keep track of all my events and projects.

提案: 回答中时态错误较多，如“forgot”应为“forget”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often forget to bring my laptop when I go to school because it's heavy and I usually leave it on my desk. When I'm in a hurry to get to class, I sometimes forget to take it with me.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误（如“prodigal”用错词）和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确的词汇，避免口语填充词，表达要简洁明了。

例: I need to remember my daily schedule, so I rely on Google Calendar. It helps me keep track of all my appointments and sends me reminders before events.

提案: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰影响理解，如“address was send me the note”。建议使用正确的语法结构，避免重复和口语填充词，使表达更自然。

例: First, I record important tasks in my Google Calendar and set notifications. This way, I receive reminders the day before, which helps me remember what I need to do.

× I always use a Google Calendar to record every event that and project that I should do.

✓ I always use a Google Calendar to record every event and project that I should do.

句子中“that and project that”结构不正确，应该去掉多余的“that”，使句子结构清晰。

× It could meet always memorize everything.

✓ It helps me always memorize everything.

原句结构混乱，语序错误，应该调整为“helps me always memorize everything”表达正确的意思。

× I think I often forgot to bring my laptop with me when I going out for school.

✓ I think I often forget to bring my laptop with me when I go out for school.

“forgot”是过去式，与“often”表示习惯性动作不符，应使用一般现在时“forget”；“going”应改为动词原形“go”与“when”引导的时间状语从句保持一致。

× when I going out for school.

✓ when I go out for school.

“going”作为动名词不适合此处，应使用动词原形“go”与“when”引导的时间状语从句搭配。

× So sometimes when you hurry up to go to class, I often forgot to bring it.

✓ So sometimes when I hurry up to go to class, I often forget to bring it.

句中“you”与主语不一致，应改为“I”；“forgot”应改为一般现在时“forget”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× which make my schedule prodigal and memorable because I could always see everything that I shut down in the week or so.

✓ which makes my schedule organized and memorable because I can always see everything that I set down in the week or so.

“make”应为第三人称单数“makes”与先行词“which”一致；“prodigal”用词错误，应为“organized”；“could”改为“can”表示现在能力；“shut down”用词错误，应为“set down”。

× In addition, they also will send me the note when my daylight is.

✓ In addition, it will also send me a note when my deadline is.

“they”指代不明，应为“it”指代Google Calendar；“the note”改为“a note”更自然；“daylight”用词错误，应为“deadline”。

× Well I first I will record it in my Google Calendar and the second I will set the notification.

✓ Well, first I will record it in my Google Calendar, and second, I will set the notification.

句子缺少逗号分隔，导致结构不清晰，添加逗号使句子更通顺。

× So the day before my Google Calendar address was send me the note.

✓ So the day before, my Google Calendar will send me the note.

“address was send me”结构错误，应改为“will send me”；“address”多余，应去掉。

× Notice that I could umm, kid myself knowing that I need to do this tomorrow.

✓ Notice that I could, umm, remind myself knowing that I need to do this tomorrow.

“kid myself”用词错误，应为“remind myself”表达提醒自己的意思。