Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“if it come to”和“those some gossip”。建议加强语法基础，避免重复和冗余，同时使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when they are interesting to me. For example, if my friends share some gossip, I can remember the details for a long time because it catches my attention.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“I'm very busy for work”和“I'm feel embarrassing”，表达不够连贯。建议练习使用连贯的句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: Yes, once I forgot to pick up my friends at the airport because I was very busy with work and lost track of time. I felt embarrassed, but fortunately, my friends were understanding.

提案: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，如“as my student”和“knowledge UMM”。建议使用完整句子，避免口头语，并且提供更具体的细节。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study tasks, upcoming exams, and project deadlines to stay organized and perform well.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“a do list”和“I can I can't forgot”。建议注意冠词使用，避免语法错误，并使表达更清晰连贯。

例: I use a to-do list and set reminders on my phone. These tools are very helpful for my work, so I don't forget important things.

× Yes I am, especially when it come to some interesting things.

✓ Yes I am, especially when it comes to some interesting things.

动词come在第三人称单数时应加-s，变为comes。

× For example if my PR, if my friends tell me those some gossip, I can remember the detail after a long time.

✓ For example, if my friends tell me some gossip, I can remember the details after a long time.

使用了不正确的代词和多余的词语，'those some'应改为'some'，'detail'应为复数'details'。

× I guess I am a good at memory for things that catch my interest.

✓ I guess I have a good memory for things that catch my interest.

'a good at memory'结构错误，应改为'have a good memory'。

× Yes, once I forgot to take my friends at the airport.

✓ Yes, once I forgot to pick up my friends at the airport.

动词搭配错误，'take someone at the airport'不合适，应使用'pick up'表示接人。

× I'm very busy for work.

✓ I'm very busy with work.

固定搭配是'busy with something'，不能用'busy for'。

× I'm very busy with work. Uh, that I'm uh, lost of time, but uh, so I'm feel embarrassing, but luckily my friends don't understand.

✓ I'm very busy with work. Uh, I lost track of time, so I felt embarrassed, but luckily my friends didn't mind.

'lost of time'错误，应为'lost track of time'；'I'm feel'时态错误，应为'I felt'；'don't understand'时态不符，应为'didn't mind'。

× I need to remember my study tasks as my student, need to remember exams and knowledge UMM and I also need to remember the project deadlines.

✓ I need to remember my study tasks as a student, remember exams and knowledge, and also remember the project deadlines.

'as my student'应为'as a student'，句子结构不完整，需补充连词。

× I use a do list or set a reminders on my phone.

✓ I use a to-do list or set reminders on my phone.

'do list'应为'to-do list'，'a reminders'数量不匹配，'reminders'为复数时不加冠词。

× I can I can't forgot important things.

✓ I can't forget important things.

'forgot'是过去式，句中应使用现在时态'forget'。