Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了观点并给出了例子，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“I'm not the person really good at memorizing”应为“I am not really good at memorizing”。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意语法准确性。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I find it difficult to remember mathematical formulas or scientific theories.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，如“It seldom happen”应为“It seldom happens”。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I rarely forget important things because I have a good habit of keeping notes on my phone. This helps me follow my calendar and set reminders for deadlines.

提案: 回答中信息较多，但句子较长且缺少连接词，导致表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词如“and”或“also”来连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: During the day, I need to remember my lesson schedules and important dates related to my internship. Also, after work, I have to remember appointments with my friends.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“take the notes on the wall to”不完整且不自然。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I use two methods to remember important things. First, I keep notes and set reminders on my phone, which I can check anytime. Also, when I study in the evening, I sometimes put notes on the wall to help me remember.

× It seldom happen as I have a good habit of keeping notes on my cell phone to make sure that I could follow the calendars and set reminders about the deadlines of my schedule.

✓ It seldom happens as I have a good habit of keeping notes on my cell phone to make sure that I could follow the calendars and set reminders about the deadlines of my schedule.

主语是单数第三人称"It"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"happens"，而不是原句中的"happen"。这是主谓一致错误。

× I'm not the person really good at memorizing.

✓ I'm not really the person good at memorizing.

原句中"the person really good"的词序不正确，应该将副词"really"放在冠词"the"之后，形容词"good"之前，形成正确的词序。

× During the daytime I have to keep in mind about the lesson schedules and some important calendars with my internship and after work I have to remember the appointment with my friend.

✓ During the daytime I have to keep in mind the lesson schedules and some important calendars related to my internship, and after work I have to remember the appointment with my friend.

短语"keep in mind about"是不正确的搭配，正确用法是"keep in mind"后直接接宾语，不加介词"about"。另外，"calendars with my internship"表达不清，应改为"calendars related to my internship"。

× And when I was studying at dusk, I sometimes take the notes on the wall to.

✓ And when I was studying at dusk, I sometimes take notes on the wall too.

"take the notes on the wall to"中的"to"应为"too"，表示"也"，且"take notes"不需要定冠词"the"。这是介词和冠词使用错误。