Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak daha etkili ve akıcı olması için bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi genişletebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, "memorizing information" yerine daha çeşitli kelimeler kullanabilirsiniz.

例: Generally, I am not very good at memorising things; however, I always take notes on my phone to remind myself, which helps me stay organized and up to date.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, unutkanlığınızın sonucunu ve duygularınızı belirterek cevabı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

例: Yes, once I forgot my surgery date, so the doctors had to call me urgently to remind me. It was the most important thing I ever forgot, and I felt quite embarrassed about it.

提案: Cümlelerinizde bağlaç kullanımı ve dilbilgisi açısından geliştirme yapabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, günlük hatırlamanız gereken şeyleri daha detaylı ve açıklayıcı şekilde ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: I need to remember to feed my cats and make sure their water is fresh. Besides, I usually turn on the hot water before I go shopping so it's ready when I return.

提案: Cevabınız oldukça iyi ancak bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak ve örnekler vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

例: Some important tasks, like feeding my cats, have become routines and habits. However, for other daily tasks, I usually take notes and set reminders on my phone to ensure I don't forget anything.

× Yes, once I forgot my surgery date so doctors called me and they called me immediately to surgery.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my surgery date, so the doctors called me and took me immediately to surgery.

The sentence contains past tense verbs but lacks proper article usage and verb choice. 'Doctors' should be preceded by 'the' as it refers to specific doctors. Also, 'they called me immediately to surgery' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'took me immediately to surgery' to indicate being taken to the operation room.

× That was my biggest forgotten.

✓ That was my biggest forgetfulness.

'Forgotten' is the past participle form and cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun form is 'forgetfulness' to express the state of forgetting something.

× I have to be sure about their water is fresh.

✓ I have to be sure that their water is fresh.

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'about' with a clause. The correct structure is 'be sure that...' to introduce a clause. Also, 'their water is fresh' is a clause, so 'about' is not appropriate here.

× I have to open hot water before I go for shopping.

✓ I have to turn on the hot water before I go shopping.

The verb 'open' is incorrect when referring to starting water flow; 'turn on' is the correct phrasal verb. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'for'.