Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“forget a bring important item”应为“forget to bring important items”。建议注意句子结构的完整性和时态的一致性，同时避免重复和口头语“Umm”。

例: I am not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I often forgot to bring important items to school, such as my umbrella and water bottle. Because of these experiences, I think my memory is quite poor.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“forget important something”应为“forget something important”，且表达不够连贯。建议加强句子结构的准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last summer during a holiday, I had a travel plan with my family, but when I arrived at the airport, I couldn't find my passport because I had left it at home.

提案: 回答中有重复和口头语，且部分名词单复数错误，如“important thing”应为“important things”。建议减少口头语，注意名词的单复数形式，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things. For example, at school, I often have important meetings and social activities, so I usually make a list to help me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“make list”应为“make a list”，“help you to to make the plan”重复。建议注意冠词的使用，避免重复，并使句子更简洁自然。

例: As I mentioned, I usually make a list to remember important things. However, nowadays I prefer using my phone or computer because there are many useful apps that help me plan and stay organized.

× when I was a child I often forget a bring important item to school like my umbrella and water bottle.

✓ when I was a child I often forgot to bring important items to school like my umbrella and water bottle.

这里“forget”时态错误，应为过去时“forgot”；“a bring”结构错误，应为“to bring”；“item”应为复数“items”，因为后面列举了多个物品。

× Umm because of this experience I think my memory isn't.

✓ Umm, because of this experience, I think my memory isn't very good.

句子结构不完整，缺少形容词补充说明“memory isn't”后面的内容，需补充“very good”使句子完整。

× Honestly, I often forget important something.

✓ Honestly, I often forget something important.

“important something”词序错误，应为“something important”。

× last summer uh holiday I had a child trial plan with my family but when I arrived in at the airport I couldn't find my passport.

✓ last summer holiday I had a child trial plan with my family but when I arrived at the airport I couldn't find my passport.

“arrived in at”中“in”多余，应去掉；“summer uh holiday”中“uh”是口语填充词，书面语中应去除。

× I realize I had left a left at home.

✓ I realized I had left it at home.

“a left”错误，应该用代词“it”指代护照；“realize”时态应为过去时“realized”。

× there are many important thing I need to remember.

✓ there are many important things I need to remember.

“thing”应为复数“things”，因为前面有“many”修饰。

× I usually would make list to remember something important,

✓ I usually would make a list to remember something important,

“make list”缺少冠词，应为“make a list”。

× there are a lot of useful apps to help you to to make the plan.

✓ there are a lot of useful apps to help you to make the plan.

“to to”重复，应去掉一个“to”。

× Yes, it's a good way to for me.

✓ Yes, it's a good way for me.

“to for me”中“to”多余，应去掉。