Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够自然且表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且内容不够具体。建议用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并给出具体原因。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly. For example, I sometimes forget people's names shortly after meeting them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I once forgot to feed my cat during the National Day holiday, so it was very hungry when I came back.

提案: 句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子并用连接词连接观点，使内容更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to have meals on time. Recently, I also try to remember to study English for a longer time each day.

提案: 表达有些重复且不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并举例说明。

例: I usually make a checklist to remember important things, like birthdays, so I don't forget them.

× No, I'm not really good at memorizing things because I think memorizing are full of happiness and sadness.

✓ No, I'm not really good at memorizing things because I think memorizing is full of happiness and sadness.

这里的主语是单数形式的动名词'memorizing'，所以谓语动词应该用单数形式'is'，而不是复数形式'are'。动名词作为主语时，谓语动词要与其保持单数一致。

× I just want to go on the future.

✓ I just want to go into the future.

短语应为'go into the future'，表示进入未来。'go on the future'是不正确的搭配，介词使用错误。

× I don't want to remind.

✓ I don't want to be reminded.

动词'remind'通常需要宾语，且此处表达被动含义，应该用被动语态'be reminded'。原句缺少宾语且语态错误。

× Yeah, I remember I forgotten to feed my cat when I traveled in National Day, so they were so hungry in those time.

✓ Yeah, I remember I forgot to feed my cat when I traveled during National Day, so it was so hungry at that time.

'forgotten'是过去分词，需与助动词连用，此处应使用一般过去时'forgot'。'in National Day'应改为'during National Day'，'they'指代单数猫应改为'it'，'those time'应为'that time'。

× I remember I forgotten to feed my cat when I traveled in National Day, so they were so hungry in those time.

✓ Yeah, I remember I forgot to feed my cat when I traveled during National Day, so it was so hungry at that time.

'in National Day'应改为'during National Day'，表示在某个节日期间。'in those time'应改为'at that time'，表示特定时间点。

× so they were so hungry in those time.

✓ so it was so hungry at that time.

'cat'是单数，代词应使用单数'it'，谓语动词也应使用单数'was'。'those time'应为单数形式'that time'。

× In typical days, I think we must remember have meals on time in my daily life, but recently I need to remember studying English much time in my daily life.

✓ On typical days, I think we must remember to have meals on time in my daily life, but recently I need to remember to study English for a long time in my daily life.

'remember have meals'缺少不定式'to'，应为'remember to have meals'。'studying English much time'表达不自然，应改为'remember to study English for a long time'。介词'on typical days'更合适。

× but recently I need to remember studying English much time in my daily life.

✓ but recently I need to remember to study English for a long time in my daily life.

动词'need'后接动词时，通常用不定式'to study'，而不是动名词'studying'。'much time'应改为'for a long time'以表达时间长度。

× Mostly I do not think to remember things, but when I remember important things, I always make a checklist to avoid forgetting important things such as birthday.

✓ Mostly I do not try to remember things, but when I remember important things, I always make a checklist to avoid forgetting important things such as birthdays.

'do not think to remember'表达不自然，应改为'do not try to remember'。'such as birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，表示诸如生日等事项。