Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤り（"a easier"は"an easier"）を直し、より具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。また、冗長な表現を避け、5文以内にまとめることを意識してください。

例: Actually, no. I'm not good at memorizing things like historical events and people's names. When I was in high school, I took many notes to help me revise. This method made it easier for me to remember information for a long time.

提案: 回答は具体的で効果的ですが、接続詞を使って文のつながりをより明確にすると良いでしょう。また、"musicians"の前に"my favorite"を入れると自然です。

例: Yes, I once forgot to buy tickets for my favorite musicians' concert. It happened about two years ago, and I regretted it deeply because it was their first performance in my city. Since then, I always carefully check the schedule to avoid making the same mistake.

提案: 回答に"uh"などのフィラーが多く含まれているため、流暢さを向上させる練習が必要です。また、"Notes and calendars apps"は"note-taking and calendar apps"の方が自然です。具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

例: I usually use note-taking and calendar apps to remember important things. Since I'm not good at memorizing, I regularly check these apps to make sure I don't forget anything important.

提案: 文法の誤り（"Even though I forget some of them recall me about them"）を修正し、より明確で自然な表現にする必要があります。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを良くしましょう。

例: I talk with my close friends and family about important things because discussing helps me remember better. Even if I forget some details, they usually remind me, which is a helpful way to keep things in mind.

× I'm not good at memorizing things like historical event and people's names.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things like historical events and people's names.

'Historical event' should be plural 'historical events' because it refers to multiple events, matching the plural 'things'.

× It's a easier way to remember things for a long time.

✓ It's an easier way to remember things for a long time.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'easier'.

× I regretted it so much because they were performing in my city for the first time.

✓ I regretted it so much because they performed in my city for the first time.

The past continuous 'were performing' is less appropriate here; simple past 'performed' fits better to indicate a completed action in the past.

× So I carefully checked the schedule to avoid the same mistake.

✓ So I carefully checked the schedule to avoid making the same mistake.

The verb 'avoid' should be followed by a gerund ('making') rather than a noun phrase directly.

× I usually use Notes and calendars apps to remember important things.

✓ I usually use Notes and calendar apps to remember important things.

The plural 'calendars apps' is incorrect; it should be 'calendar apps' as 'calendar' modifies 'apps' as an adjective.

× I find it easier to remember important things when I discuss it.

✓ I find it easier to remember important things when I discuss them.

The pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'important things'.

× Even though I forget some of them recall me about them.

✓ Even though I forget some of them, they remind me about them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear; 'they remind me about them' correctly expresses the intended meaning.