Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion about your memorising ability and support it with a reason or example. Also, avoid negative phrasing that confuses the meaning.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often use repetition to remember important information.

提案: Your answer is relevant and direct but could be improved by adding more details to explain the situation and your feelings. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once missed my math exam because I forgot the date, which made me feel very disappointed.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer directly what you need to remember and explain how you manage it. Use correct tense and linking words for clarity.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks, so I use a To-Do List to help me stay organized and avoid forgetting important things.

提案: Your answer is short and repetitive. Try to expand your answer by explaining your method in more detail and why it helps you. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I remember important things by writing them down in my daily list because this helps me keep track of my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× I think I'm not forgetting the important things.

✓ I think I don't forget the important things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'I'm not forgetting' to express a general ability or habit. In English, to talk about habits or general truths, the simple present tense is used. Therefore, 'I don't forget' is the correct form.

× I think I needed To Do List to avoid forgetting.

✓ I think I need a To-Do List to avoid forgetting.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'needed' when referring to a current or general need. Since the question is about daily life (present), the simple present tense 'need' should be used. Also, 'To Do List' should be 'a To-Do List' with the article 'a' and hyphens for correct noun form.

× I I write important things in my daily list.

✓ I write important things in my daily list.

The sentence contains a repeated pronoun 'I I', which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate pronoun corrects the sentence.