Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. I often forget where I put my keys or phone and I struggle to remember names and face. I usually rely on notes and reminders to keep track of things.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt really bad about it because we are very close. I apologized and promised to keep it up to them.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
I need to remember my study tasks like deadlines and homework. I also have to check my study checklist to make sure I don't miss anything important.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I use my smartphone to remember important things, I set reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I use calendar apps to keep track of datas. It's really helpful for me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 85.0提案: 你的回答自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达。例如，“I often forget where I put my keys or phone”与“struggle to remember names and face”可以合并表达。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put my keys or phone, and I also struggle to remember people's names and faces, so I usually rely on notes and reminders to keep track of important things.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答直接且内容相关，但最后一句表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的表达方式，并增加连接词使内容更流畅。
例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel really bad because we are very close. Therefore, I apologized sincerely and promised to remember important dates in the future.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答简洁且内容具体，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember study tasks such as deadlines and homework, so I always check my study checklist to ensure I don't miss anything important.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答内容具体，但句子结构稍显简单，且“datas”应为“dates”。建议使用连接词并注意单复数形式。
例: I use my smartphone to remember important things by setting reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I also use calendar apps to keep track of dates, which is really helpful for me.
文法
× I often forget where I put my keys or phone and I struggle to remember names and face.
✓ I often forget where I put my keys or phone and I struggle to remember names and faces.
The word 'face' should be plural 'faces' because it refers to multiple people, matching the plural 'names'. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I apologized and promised to keep it up to them.
✓ I apologized and promised to make it up to them.
The phrase 'keep it up to them' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'make it up to them' meaning to compensate for a mistake. This is a past tense and phrase usage issue.
× I use calendar apps to keep track of datas.
✓ I use calendar apps to keep track of data.
The word 'data' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'datas'. This is a singular and plural issue.
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