Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things. I can always memorize some things rapidly. For example, when I was in high school, my English teacher asked us to memorize some short essays. I can always memorize this rapidly and in a short time.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I have. When I was in primary school I forgot my piano test because over that period I was immersed in playing a popular computer game and then when my teacher called me and noticed me, I found myself.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
In my daily life, I often need to memorize some academic theories. For example, I always need to memorize some complex terms that will be tested in my final exam, which is really difficult to memorize.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I always make a noticement or summarize the key points. For example, when I prepare my final exam and learning some complex terms, I may write some lines of the key points which helpful for me to memorize.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词，且部分表达重复。建议使用更多连接词使回答更流畅，并避免重复表达。
例: Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things because I can learn new information quickly. For instance, when I was in high school, my English teacher asked us to memorize short essays, and I was able to do this efficiently within a short time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且缺少逻辑连接词。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使叙述更连贯。
例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, when I was in primary school, I missed my piano test because I was so absorbed in playing a popular computer game that I lost track of time.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答内容较为单一，缺少多样化细节和连接词。建议增加更多具体细节，并使用连接词使回答更丰富。
例: In my daily life, I need to remember various academic theories. For example, I often memorize complex terms for my final exams, which can be challenging, so I try to review them regularly to retain the information.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 68.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够自然。建议注意语法和拼写，使用更自然的表达方式。
例: I usually make notes or summarize the key points to remember important things. For example, when preparing for my final exams, I write down important terms and review these notes regularly to help me memorize them.
文法
× I can always memorize this rapidly and in a short time.
✓ I could always memorize them rapidly and in a short time.
这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'this' 应改为复数 'them'，因为前文提到的是多篇短文。
× I forgot my piano test because over that period I was immersed in playing a popular computer game and then when my teacher called me and noticed me, I found myself.
✓ I forgot my piano test because during that period I was immersed in playing a popular computer game, and then when my teacher called me and noticed me, I realized it.
'over that period' 应改为更自然的 'during that period'。'found myself' 用法不当，应改为 'realized it' 表示意识到忘记了考试。
× I always make a noticement or summarize the key points.
✓ I always make a note or summarize the key points.
'noticement' 不是正确的单词，应使用 'note' 表示笔记。
× I may write some lines of the key points which helpful for me to memorize.
✓ I may write some lines of the key points which are helpful for me to memorize.
缺少系动词 'are'，使句子完整。
× which helpful for me to memorize.
✓ which are helpful for me to memorize.
同上，缺少系动词 'are'，导致句子不完整。
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