Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复，同时保持句子简洁。

例: I would say I'm not very good at memorising things, especially when I have to remember something in a very short time. In such situations, I usually perform poorly.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地叙述事件，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I once forgot the birthday of a close friend and only realized it two days later, which made me feel very guilty.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，明确说明需要记住的内容。

例: As a PhD student, I have many deadlines for various tasks, so I need to remember all these important dates.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达并使用正确的复数形式和时态。

例: I use reminders on my phone and check them regularly to make sure I don't forget important deadlines.

× I would say I'm not gonna memorize things so well, especially for the short short term memories.

✓ I would say I'm not going to memorize things very well, especially for short-term memories.

“gonna”是口语缩写，正式写作中应使用“going to”。“short short term memories”重复且表达不准确，应改为“short-term memories”。

× If I need to rush to remember things in really, really a short time, I would really perform bad.

✓ If I need to rush to remember things in a really, really short time, I would really perform badly.

“perform bad”中“bad”应为副词形式“badly”修饰动词“perform”。“really, really a short time”中“a”位置错误，应为“a really, really short time”。

× I once forgot the birthday of one of my very good friends and I've I I realized it after two days of two days after her birthday and it really made me feel guilty about that.

✓ I once forgot the birthday of one of my very good friends and I realized it two days after her birthday, and it really made me feel guilty about that.

“I've I I realized”重复且错误，应为“I realized”。“after two days of two days after her birthday”表达重复，应简化为“two days after her birthday”。

× Since I I'm a PhD student right now I have many deadlines of our daily jobs.

✓ Since I'm a PhD student right now, I have many deadlines for our daily tasks.

“deadlines of our daily jobs”中“jobs”用词不当，应为“tasks”或“work”。“deadlines for”更符合搭配习惯。

× So I need to remember loss of deadline of our diverse jobs.

✓ So I need to remember lots of deadlines for our diverse tasks.

“loss of deadline”表达错误，应为“lots of deadlines”。“jobs”改为“tasks”更合适。

× I have a reminder in my phones and I will check it regularly to ensure that I don't, uh, I, I, I don't forget this important deadlines.

✓ I have a reminder on my phone and I will check it regularly to ensure that I don't forget these important deadlines.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，因为通常指一个手机。冠词“this”应改为复数“these”以匹配复数名词“deadlines”。