Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 'uh' 같은 불필요한 말버릇을 줄이고 문장을 더 간결하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 'planning application' 대신 'planning apps'나 'reminder apps'와 같은 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

例: I'm not very good at memorizing important information, so I usually rely on planning apps like calendars or reminder apps to keep track of my tasks and appointments.

提案: 'carefully paper my teacher'라는 표현이 부자연스럽고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 대신 'politely asked my teacher'와 같은 표현을 사용하고, 문장을 더 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I once forgot the deadline for an assignment. At first, I was very embarrassed, so I politely asked my teacher to extend the deadline.

提案: 문장이 완성되지 않았고, 'smart tasks'라는 표현이 모호합니다. 문장을 완성하고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 답변을 명확하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments with my parents and important tasks related to my long-term goals. To help me remember, I usually write them down in my planner.

提案: 'purse'와 'I'm memo' 같은 표현이 부자연스럽고 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 고치고, 구체적인 방법을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I remember important things in many ways. For example, I use both physical and digital calendars to note important appointments.

× I usually rely on, uh planning application like a calendar or reminder app to help me keep track of of my tasks and appointments.

✓ I usually rely on a planning application like a calendar or reminder app to help me keep track of my tasks and appointments.

The phrase 'rely on, uh planning application' is incorrect due to the misplaced comma and missing article 'a'. Also, 'of of' is a repetition error. Correct usage is 'rely on a planning application' and 'keep track of my tasks'.

× Yes, I have forgotten the deadline on my assignment at the time.

✓ Yes, I forgot the deadline on my assignment at the time.

The present perfect tense 'have forgotten' is not appropriate with the specific past time 'at the time'. Simple past 'forgot' should be used to indicate a completed action in the past.

× I carefully paper my teacher to postpone the deadline.

✓ I carefully asked my teacher to postpone the deadline.

The verb 'paper' is incorrect here; likely intended verb is 'asked'. Also, 'carefully' should modify the verb 'asked'. The correct phrase is 'I carefully asked my teacher'.

× Appointments with my parents and smart tasks related to my final goal are needed to remember in my daily life.

✓ I need to remember appointments with my parents and smart tasks related to my final goal in my daily life.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect passive construction. The subject should be 'I' with active verb 'need to remember' to clearly express the idea.

× In order to remember that I usually.

✓ In order to remember that, I usually...

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or clause after 'usually'. It should be completed to form a full sentence.

× I remember important things in many ways purse I utilize the calendar in both physically and digitally.

✓ I remember important things in many ways because I utilize the calendar both physically and digitally.

The word 'purse' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'because'. Also, 'in both physically and digitally' is incorrect; correct form is 'both physically and digitally'.

× I'm memo important appointments.

✓ I memo important appointments.

The phrase 'I'm memo' is incorrect; 'memo' is a noun or verb but 'I'm' (I am) does not fit here. The correct form is 'I memo important appointments' or better 'I make memos of important appointments'.