Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 더 명확하고 간결하게 자신의 기억력에 대해 직접적으로 답변하고, 예시를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, sometimes I forget where I put my keys, but I usually remember after retracing my steps.

提案: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많고, 내용 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 중요한 경험을 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 올바르게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I once forgot my passport when I traveled abroad, which made my family very upset with me.

提案: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 일상에서 기억해야 할 구체적인 사항을 명확하게 표현하고, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my iPad to the academy every day, so I usually prepare it the night before.

提案: 중복된 표현과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 중요한 일을 기억하는 방법을 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: When I have important things to remember, I write them down in my memo and review the notes regularly.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing something.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things.

'Something' is used for singular or unspecified items, but here the plural 'things' is appropriate because the question is about memorizing multiple items. 'Memorizing things' is the correct expression.

× For instance, I forgot before I put them.

✓ For instance, I forgot where I put them.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. Adding 'where' clarifies the meaning, indicating the location where the items were put.

× Put it something and I can remember after I come back.

✓ I put something somewhere and I can remember it after I come back.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and adding words like 'somewhere' and 'it' make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× When I went to the travel to overseas I forgot to bring my passport so my mom's and these are very angry for me.

✓ When I traveled overseas, I forgot to bring my passport, so my mom and others were very angry with me.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'went to the travel to overseas' is incorrect; 'mom's and these are' is unclear; 'angry for me' should be 'angry with me'. The correction fixes verb usage, possessive errors, and prepositions.

× In my daily life I go to the Academy every day and I have to bring for my iPad.

✓ In my daily life, I go to the Academy every day and I have to bring my iPad.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The verb 'bring' does not require 'for' before the object.

× So before one day.

✓ So, the day before,

The phrase 'So before one day' is incomplete and unclear. Changing it to 'So, the day before,' provides a clearer temporal reference.

× If I have important things, I check on the my memo and I write it and and I check again on a previous day.

✓ If I have important things, I check my memo, write them down, and check it again the next day.

The phrase 'on the my memo' is incorrect; 'the' and 'my' should not be used together. Also, 'write it and and I check again on a previous day' is awkward; 'write them down' and 'check it again the next day' are clearer and grammatically correct.