Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и логичным. Избегайте лишних слов и уточните, почему вы считаете себя хорошим в запоминании. Также используйте связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I pay close attention and often use repetition. For instance, when I was a child, I used to remember details from family trips to the cinema, which created lasting memories.

提案: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо на вопрос, избегать неуместных фраз и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: No, I have rarely forgotten important things because I make notes and focus when studying. For example, I use headphones to block distractions and concentrate on learning.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и полноту. Используйте связующие слова и завершайте мысли, чтобы ответ был более естественным и полным.

例: In daily life, it is important to remember to stay organized and manage time well. For example, making a schedule helps me plan my day, and waking up early allows me to be more productive.

提案: Ответ нечеткий и содержит повторения. Следует отвечать прямо, использовать связующие слова и конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и связным.

例: I remember important things by making lists and setting reminders. Although it can be difficult sometimes, these methods help me keep track of tasks and memories.

× So I think a little things in the past will become very important memories in the.

✓ So I think a little thing in the past will become a very important memory in the present.

The phrase 'a little things' is incorrect because 'little' is used with singular uncountable nouns or singular countable nouns, so it should be 'a little thing' (singular). Also, 'memories' should be singular 'memory' to match the singular subject. Additionally, the sentence was incomplete and 'in the' should be completed as 'in the present' for clarity.

× Actually no, because I always try to remember all the things which make me unforgettable person.

✓ Actually no, because I always try to remember all the things which make me an unforgettable person.

The phrase 'unforgettable person' requires an article 'an' before it because it is a singular countable noun phrase. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× For example, when I was studying I put my headphones and try to understand all the information a lot of.

✓ For example, when I was studying I put on my headphones and tried to understand a lot of information.

The verb 'put' should be followed by the preposition 'on' to form the phrasal verb 'put on' meaning to wear. Also, 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match 'was studying'. The phrase 'all the information a lot of' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of information'. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.

× For example, when I was studying I put my headphones and try to understand all the information a lot of.

✓ For example, when I was studying I put on my headphones and tried to understand a lot of information.

The quantifier 'a lot of' should precede the noun 'information'. The original sentence had 'all the information a lot of' which is incorrect word order.

× For example, you can make schedule which help you to stay organized and also you should wake up early, eat healthy foods to improve.

✓ For example, you can make a schedule which helps you to stay organized and also you should wake up early and eat healthy foods to improve.

The noun 'schedule' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'schedule'. The sentence was missing the conjunction 'and' before 'eat healthy foods' for proper coordination.

× For example, you can make schedule which help you to stay organized and also you should wake up early, eat healthy foods to improve.

✓ For example, you can make a schedule which helps you to stay organized and also you should wake up early and eat healthy foods to improve.

The relative clause 'which help you' refers to 'schedule' (singular), so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in third person singular.

× It is essential to remember important things for me because because a little things in the past will become a very important memories in the present.

✓ It is essential for me to remember important things because a little thing in the past will become a very important memory in the present.

The phrase 'a little things' is incorrect; 'little' with singular noun requires singular 'thing'. Also, 'a very important memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. It should be singular 'memory' to match the singular subject.

× However, uh, remember to all the things. Sometimes will be hard, but I try.

✓ However, remembering all the things can sometimes be hard, but I try.

The original sentence 'remember to all the things' is ungrammatical. The gerund 'remembering' is needed as the subject. Also, 'Sometimes will be hard' lacks a subject; 'can sometimes be hard' is a correct structure. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.