Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和动词形式不正确，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更简洁的表达方式，同时避免重复和冗余。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things now, but when I was a child, I had a good memory and could remember numbers like my parents' and grandparents' phone numbers.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I often forget things, which makes me feel nervous. Sometimes, I even miss important appointments. Therefore, I try to remember important things by saving them on my phone.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复和口语化填充词。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember various information, which can be difficult. However, I believe my memory will improve with regular practice.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually write important things in my notes and keep them together. However, recently I find that using a phone app to remember important things is more convenient because I sometimes forget my physical notes.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things but when I was a child I have a good ability to memorizing things because I can remember any numbers such as my parents, my grandparents, I all.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things but when I was a child I had a good ability to memorize things because I can remember any numbers such as my parents', my grandparents', and all of them.

句中“have a good ability to memorizing things”中，“to”后应接动词原形，因此应改为“to memorize things”。另外，时态应与“when I was a child”保持一致，使用过去时“had”。“my parents, my grandparents, I all”表达不清，改为“my parents', my grandparents', and all of them”更准确。

× Yes, I often forgotten something. Uh, it's always make me feel nervous and some, sometimes it's made me miss some important things. But uh, I try to remember these things, important things in my phone.

✓ Yes, I often forget something. Uh, it always makes me feel nervous and sometimes it has made me miss some important things. But uh, I try to remember these important things in my phone.

“often forgotten”错误使用了过去分词，应使用一般现在时“often forget”表示经常发生的动作。“it's always make”主语是单数，谓语动词应为第三人称单数形式“makes”。“sometimes it's made”时态应为现在完成时“has made”，表示过去发生并对现在有影响。

× I need to remember some knowledge in my daily life but it's so difficult for me. But I think umm it will be better more and more because the mem rememberability need to practice.

✓ I need to remember some knowledge in my daily life but it's very difficult for me. But I think umm it will get better and better because memory needs to be practiced.

“so difficult”改为“very difficult”更自然。“better more and more”表达不正确，应为“get better and better”。“the mem rememberability”表达不清，改为“memory”。“need to practice”缺少被动结构，应为“needs to be practiced”。

× I often remember important things in the notes and bring it together, but now I think remember important things in the form is more convenient because sometimes I often forget my notes together.

✓ I often remember important things from the notes and bring them together, but now I think remembering important things on my phone is more convenient because sometimes I often forget my notes.

“remember important things in the notes”应改为“remember important things from the notes”，表示从笔记中记忆。“bring it together”中的“it”应为复数“them”，因为指代“important things”。“remember important things in the form”表达不清，推测为“on my phone”。“forget my notes together”表达不自然，改为“forget my notes”。