Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
It depends. When I have to recite my textbooks, I will immediately forgot it. On the other hand, when I want to hang out with my friends, I will immediately go to the park and so on.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Sure, of course, when I was in primary school, I need to take part in the presentation, but I forgot to prepare the presentation. In the end, I failed to be a student representative.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
For me, I always take notes on my notebooks and makes some plans in my online platforms like notebooks. I think that it can remind me to do a lot of things.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
MMM, I always use a lot of method in order to help me remember important things. But a lot of time I always write some important things in my physical notebooks. I think that it is convenient for me to recall some significant events.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态错误和拼写错误，且表达不够自然，内容有些混乱。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复使用“immediately”，并且回答要更具体和连贯。
例: It depends on the situation. For example, I find it difficult to memorize textbooks quickly, but I easily remember plans to meet my friends because I am more interested in social activities.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达略显重复。建议使用过去时态描述过去的事件，并且可以增加细节使内容更丰富。
例: Yes, I once forgot to prepare for a presentation when I was in primary school. As a result, I couldn't perform well and missed the chance to become a student representative.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如主谓不一致，且表达不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性，使用更具体的词汇，并且结构更连贯。
例: In my daily life, I usually take notes in my physical notebook and also use online apps to make plans. These methods help me remember important tasks effectively.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 58.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议避免使用口头语“MMM”，注意单复数形式，句子结构应更简洁明了。
例: I use several methods to remember important things, but mostly I write them down in my physical notebook because it helps me recall significant events easily.
文法
× When I have to recite my textbooks, I will immediately forgot it.
✓ When I have to recite my textbooks, I will immediately forget it.
这里使用了将来时态的助动词 will，后面的动词应该用原形 forget，而不是过去式 forgot。
× when I was in primary school, I need to take part in the presentation, but I forgot to prepare the presentation.
✓ when I was in primary school, I needed to take part in the presentation, but I forgot to prepare the presentation.
句子描述过去的情况，动词 need 应该用过去式 needed，保持时态一致。
× I always take notes on my notebooks and makes some plans in my online platforms like notebooks.
✓ I always take notes on my notebooks and make some plans in my online platforms like notebooks.
主语是复数或第一人称单数，动词应与主语一致，makes 应改为 make。
× I always use a lot of method in order to help me remember important things.
✓ I always use a lot of methods in order to help me remember important things.
a lot of 后面应接可数名词的复数形式，method 应改为 methods。
× But a lot of time I always write some important things in my physical notebooks.
✓ But a lot of times I always write some important things in my physical notebooks.
a lot of 后面接可数名词时应使用复数形式，time 应改为 times。
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