Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
We are not good at memorizing things to be honest, but I try to writing down something important in my notebook or my phone. This method helps me to not avoid something crucial.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I have forgotten something important before. One day it was my turn to be on duty in our school, but I was too busy with other exam tests and I overstepped and I felt very guilty. After that, I write down something important.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
We are at the university student. The most important things I need to remember in my daily life is the exam days. Missing an exam date could seriously affect my grades, so I always write them down in my planner. This helps me stay organized and avoid any last minute surprises.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Well, I often write down something important in my notebook, planner and my phone. This message helps me to organize my schedule and don't forget anything crucial, especially when I have a busy week again.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“try to writing”应为“try to write”，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。
例: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I try to write down important information in my notebook or phone. This helps me remember crucial tasks and avoid forgetting them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“overstepped”用法不当，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构来表达经历。
例: Yes, I once forgot my duty at school because I was busy preparing for exams. I felt very guilty, so since then I always write down important tasks to avoid forgetting them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“We are at the university student”应为“I am a university student”，且句子可以更简洁自然。建议注意主谓一致和简洁表达。
例: I am a university student, and the most important things I need to remember are exam dates. Missing an exam could seriously affect my grades, so I always write them down in my planner to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“This message helps me to organize”应为“This method helps me to organize”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确词汇和更自然的表达。
例: I usually write down important things in my notebook, planner, or phone. This method helps me organize my schedule and avoid forgetting anything important, especially during busy weeks.
文法
× I try to writing down something important in my notebook or my phone.
✓ I try to write down something important in my notebook or my phone.
动词try后面接不定式to write，而不是动名词writing。动词不定式用法错误。
× This method helps me to not avoid something crucial.
✓ This method helps me avoid something crucial.
动词help后面直接接动词原形avoid，不需要to和not的组合，且句意应为帮助避免，原句表达混乱。
× After that, I write down something important.
✓ After that, I wrote down something important.
句子描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时write的过去式wrote。
× We are at the university student.
✓ We are university students.
主语是复数we，表明多个人，student应使用复数students。
× The most important things I need to remember in my daily life is the exam days.
✓ The most important things I need to remember in my daily life are the exam days.
主语things为复数，谓语动词应使用复数are，保持主谓一致。
× Well, I often write down something important in my notebook, planner and my phone.
✓ Well, I often write down something important in my notebook, planner, and phone.
my在phone前重复使用显得冗余，且列举多个物品时应统一表达。
× This message helps me to organize my schedule and don't forget anything crucial, especially when I have a busy week again.
✓ This message helps me organize my schedule and not forget anything crucial, especially when I have a busy week again.
help后接动词原形不带to，且并列动词应保持一致，使用not forget而非don't forget。
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