Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“handles”应为“handle”，且句子结构较复杂，建议简化句子并使用更自然的表达。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I can remember information quickly for short periods, like for quizzes or dictations.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“that I will always check on what I must take”表达不够地道，建议使用更简洁且自然的句子。

例: Although I sometimes forget things, I am careful and usually make lists to help me remember important items.

提案: 这部分回答存在表达不清和词汇使用错误，如“broke a spiritual size”不合适，建议使用更准确的词汇和表达方式，句子应更连贯。

例: I use an A5-sized planner to write down all the important things I need to remember every day because it's easy to carry in my bag.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子重复且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并避免重复。

例: I usually write important notes in my planner, such as appointments, deadlines, to-do lists, and shopping lists, to help me remember everything clearly.

× I would say that I have ability to memorize things in a short duration, that I can handles my dictations or quiz easily, but I'm not a master of memorizing.

✓ I would say that I have the ability to memorize things in a short duration, that I can handle my dictations or quizzes easily, but I'm not a master of memorizing.

这里“ability”前缺少冠词“the”，因为ability是可数名词，表示特定的能力，需要冠词修饰。动词“handles”应改为“handle”，因为主语是“I”，第一人称单数，动词用原形。名词“quiz”应为复数“quizzes”，因为前面用了“my dictations or quiz”，表示多个测验，应使用复数形式。

× I'm not a master of memorizing things, but I'm a careful and dedicated person that I will always check on what I must take or I must remember, and it's important for me to put on a list to help me remember things.

✓ I'm not a master of memorizing things, but I'm a careful and dedicated person who will always check what I must take or remember, and it's important for me to put things on a list to help me remember.

关系代词“that”用于指人时应改为“who”。“check on”应简化为“check”，更符合习惯用法。短语“put on a list”应为“put things on a list”，缺少宾语。

× A schedule broke a spiritual size for me in my daily life to remember all the important things.

✓ A schedule book of a special size is important for me in my daily life to remember all the important things.

原句结构混乱，“broke a spiritual size”无意义，应改为“a schedule book of a special size”，表达“一个特定尺寸的日程本”。

× That is a A5 size that I can put into my bag easily.

✓ That is an A5 size that I can put into my bag easily.

冠词“a”后面接以元音音素开头的词时，应使用“an”，这里“A5”发音以元音音素开头，应使用“an”。

× I write many things in my schedule books.

✓ I write many things in my schedule book.

前文提到的是单数“schedule book”，此处应保持一致，使用单数形式。