Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语句不够连贯，有重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免多余的词汇，并注意单复数形式。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things, so I don't need to keep a diary to remember what I have done each day.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复。

例: Yes, once I forgot to buy a ticket for my favorite singer's concert. When I realized it, the concert was sold out, so I had to wait until next year to buy a ticket.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意名词复数形式和句子简洁性。

例: There are many things I need to remember, but the most important are my deadlines. As a university student, I write them down in a list to remind myself so I don't forget.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用正确的动词形式和完整句子，避免口语填充词。

例: I usually set schedule reminders on my phone. This way, I won't forget important things because my phone will send me repeated notifications before the deadline.

× Yes, I'm really good at memorizing different things, Uh, so I don't really need the diary to keep on what I have done in my daily life. Yes. So in this way I can always remember different thing.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing different things, uh, so I don't really need a diary to keep track of what I have done in my daily life. Yes. So in this way I can always remember different things.

这里'diary'前面缺少冠词'a'，因为'diary'是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。'different thing'应为复数形式'different things'，因为前文提到的是多样的事物。

× Yes, uh, once I have uh, forgotten to the buy the ticket of my favorite car favorite singers concert.

✓ Yes, uh, once I forgot to buy the ticket for my favorite singer's concert.

动词'forgotten'用法错误，应该用过去式'forgot'。'to the buy'中'the'多余，应去掉。'ticket of'应改为'ticket for'，表示买票参加某活动。'car favorite singers'应为'singer's'，表示所属关系。

× So when I have realized that I found actually the concert has settled out.

✓ So when I realized that I found out the concert was sold out.

时态错误，描述过去发生的事情应使用一般过去时。'have realized'改为'realized'，'has settled out'应为'was sold out'，表示过去状态。

× Oh, actually, there are a lot of things waiting for me to remember, but I think the most important is my deadline because as a university student, there are a lot of deadline for me to complete.

✓ Oh, actually, there are a lot of things waiting for me to remember, but I think the most important is my deadline because as a university student, there are a lot of deadlines for me to complete.

'deadline'应为复数形式'deadlines'，因为前面提到有很多截止日期。

× Uh, So I would just write down them in a list, uh, then as a reminder for me, so I would not forget what I'm going to do.

✓ Uh, so I would just write them down in a list, uh, then use it as a reminder for me, so I would not forget what I'm going to do.

'write down them'语序错误，正确应为'write them down'。'then as a reminder for me'缺少主语，改为'use it as a reminder'更完整。

× Well, actually I would just assigned, uh, uh, schedule reminder in on my phone.

✓ Well, actually I would just assign a schedule reminder on my phone.

'assigned'时态错误，应为动词原形'assign'。'in on'重复，去掉'in'。缺少冠词'a'。

× Once the deadline are coming, my phone will just repeatly, uh, send a message to me and then I will just know, oh, actually I have something pretty important waiting for me to do.

✓ Once the deadlines are coming, my phone will just repeatedly, uh, send a message to me and then I will just know, oh, actually I have something pretty important waiting for me to do.

'deadline'应为复数'deadlines'，与动词'are'保持一致。'repeatly'拼写错误，应为'repeatedly'。