Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使表达更流畅。

例: I used to be good at memorizing things, but as I have grown older, my memory has gradually declined.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意单复数和代词的正确使用。

例: I usually set reminders for important things, such as notes on paper or on the wall. However, I sometimes forget small things, like my house keys.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，提高表达的准确性。

例: In daily life, I need to remember small things like turning off the lights when leaving the house and bringing my keys with me.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To remember important things, I usually stick notes on the table or wall that list my important tasks.

× Well, I used to good at memorizing things, but as I grew up the memory just faded and it's just not good as before.

✓ Well, I used to be good at memorizing things, but as I grew up the memory just faded and it's just not as good as before.

句中缺少动词“be”，导致情态动词用法错误。应使用“used to be good”表示过去习惯。并且“not good as before”缺少比较结构中的“as”，应为“not as good as before”。

× Well, no, when it comes to some important things, I will always set some reminders to to remind me, just like a hint on the paper or wall.

✓ Well, no, when it comes to some important things, I always set some reminders to remind me, just like a hint on the paper or wall.

“will”在此处不合适，表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时。重复“to”是多余的，应删除。

× But that's when it comes to some small things, just like the keys of my house, I usually forget it.

✓ But when it comes to some small things, just like the keys of my house, I usually forget them.

“keys”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”而非单数“it”。

× Well as far as the daily life, there always be some small things we have always to remember.

✓ Well, as far as daily life is concerned, there are always some small things we have to remember.

“there always be”结构错误，应使用正确的“there are always”。另外，表达更自然应加“is concerned”，并调整词序。

× Just like if you turn off the light when you get out of the house and did you remember to bring the keys and just just when you leave the leave another place.

✓ Just like if you turn off the light when you get out of the house and remember to bring the keys, and just when you leave another place.

“did you remember”时态和语气不合适，句中应保持一致的陈述语气，使用“remember”。重复“just”和“leave”是多余的，应删除。

× Well, as I just said, when it comes to some important things, I usually make some reminders on the tables on the wall, just as I stick a paper and and fill with the important tasks.

✓ Well, as I just said, when it comes to some important things, I usually make some reminders on the tables or on the wall, just like sticking a paper filled with important tasks.

“just as”用法不当，应为“just like”。“and and”重复，应删除。表达更自然应使用动名词短语“sticking a paper filled with important tasks”。