Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较复杂且有重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态一致。

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, yesterday I had a chemistry quiz, and I remembered all the elements from the periodic table as well as their bonding types. This helped me get a good grade.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和冠词使用不当，且表达不够连贯。建议注意语法正确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, yesterday I went to the supermarket but forgot to buy an important ingredient, flour. Without it, I couldn't cook my meal.

提案: 回答中有词汇使用错误（如looks应为locks或其他），句子结构不清晰，建议使用准确词汇并简化句子，增强表达的清晰度和连贯性。

例: In my daily life, I usually save important notes or shopping lists on my mobile phone because it helps me remember what I have bought or need to buy. It is very convenient and easy to use.

提案: 回答中句子不完整且表达不够自然，建议避免句子碎片，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并补充完整的观点。

例: I remember important things in several ways. For example, I save notes and shopping lists on my mobile phone, which helps me keep track of what I need. Also, I sometimes use online games to train my memory, which I think is very helpful.

× Yes, I'm very good at memorizing things such as yesterday I have a quiz about chemistry bonding and I remember all the elements from the periodic table and remember all the polar or non polar structure or and the lowest formula.

✓ Yes, I'm very good at memorizing things such as yesterday I had a quiz about chemistry bonding and I remembered all the elements from the periodic table and remembered all the polar or non-polar structures and the lowest formula.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。描述昨天发生的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如'had'和'remembered'。原句中使用了现在时'have'和'remember'，不符合时间背景。建议将动词改为过去时以符合时间逻辑。

× Definitely. I sometimes forgotten something important.

✓ Definitely. I sometimes forget something important.

这里的动词'to forget'应使用一般现在时，因为句子表达的是经常发生的动作。'forgotten'是过去分词，不能单独作为谓语动词使用。应使用一般现在时'forget'。

× I forgot to buy a important ingredients.

✓ I forgot to buy an important ingredient.

'important'以元音音素开头，前面的不定冠词应为'an'而非'a'。此外，'ingredients'是复数，前面不应使用不定冠词'a'，且根据语境应为单数形式'ingredient'。

× These ingredients is flowers, so if I don't have flour, I can't cook.

✓ These ingredients are flour, so if I don't have flour, I can't cook.

'ingredients'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。另外，'flowers'应为'flour'（面粉），两者拼写不同，语义也不同。

× I went to supermarket to buy something to eat

✓ I went to the supermarket to buy something to eat

'supermarket'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指某个超市。缺少冠词导致表达不完整。

× In my daily life I usually put my important looks or the list on my mobile phone because I think putting this on my mobile phone can easy to remember something which I have buy or I want to buy and it's very convenient and easier to use.

✓ In my daily life, I usually put my important things or the list on my mobile phone because I think putting this on my mobile phone can make it easy to remember something which I have bought or want to buy, and it's very convenient and easy to use.

'looks'用词不当，应为'things'或其他合适名词。'can easy to remember'结构错误，应为'can make it easy to remember'。'have buy'时态错误，应为' have bought'。'easier to use'前缺少比较对象，且与前文不搭配，应改为'easy to use'。

× which I have buy or I want to buy

✓ which I have bought or want to buy

'have buy'时态错误，完成时态应使用过去分词'bought'。

× I usually put my notes or shopping list on my mobile because it helps me easily remember what I have bought or need to buy.

✓ I usually put my notes or shopping list on my mobile phone because it helps me easily remember what I have bought or need to buy.

'mobile'应完整表达为'mobile phone'，更符合英语习惯用法。

× So I think this is very important for.

✓ So I think this is very important.

句子末尾多余的'for'导致结构不完整，应删除。