Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「I'm going out memorizing」は意味が通じません。より自然な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I studied history because I enjoy remembering important dates and events.

提案: 意味が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りも多いです。具体的な例を挙げて、明確に答える練習をしましょう。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as submitting my homework on time, which caused me some trouble.

提案: 文が不自然で、伝えたい内容がはっきりしません。主語と動詞の一致に注意し、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べる練習をしてください。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like meeting deadlines and attending appointments.

提案: 文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい文法を使い、具体的な方法を説明する練習をしましょう。

例: I usually save important information on my phone and ask my friends to remind me when necessary.

× Yes, I'm going out memorizing.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing.

The phrase 'going out memorizing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'good at memorizing' to indicate ability. The verb 'memorizing' should be used after 'good at' as a gerund form.

× I studied history also because I am good at memorizing the history.

✓ I studied history also because I am good at memorizing history.

The definite article 'the' before 'history' is unnecessary here because 'history' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I hope I've forgotten the job and doing my homework also, it is so important for me but I can't remember that.

✓ Yes, I hope I haven't forgotten the job and doing my homework also; it is so important for me but I can't remember that.

The phrase 'I've forgotten' (present perfect) is incorrect in this context; the speaker likely means they hope they have not forgotten. Also, 'doing my homework' should be parallel with 'the job'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification.

× I what I need to do is that I should be remember for example keep the deadline and so on.

✓ What I need to do is remember, for example, to keep the deadline and so on.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect pronoun usage ('I what I need to do is that I should be remember'). The correct structure is 'What I need to do is remember'. Also, 'keep the deadline' should be 'keep to the deadline' or 'meet the deadline' but 'keep the deadline' is acceptable in informal speech.

× No think them in the phone and I want friends to say to me also.

✓ I don't think about them on the phone, and I want my friends to tell me as well.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and correct verb forms. 'No think them' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't think about them'. 'In the phone' should be 'on the phone'. 'I want friends to say to me' should be 'I want my friends to tell me'.