Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且内容不完整。建议回答时注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，尽量用完整句子表达清楚意思。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I was in Grade 1, my teacher asked me to remember to bring snow boots, and I made sure to do so.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确，句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用正确时态和连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, today my teacher gave me a paper that needed my parent's signature, but I forgot to bring it home, so it is still in my school binder.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺少逻辑连接词。建议列举物品时使用连词，并且注意句子完整性和逻辑性。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my pencil case, three pencils, two erasers, a protractor, snow boots, and a jacket because it is very cold today.

提案: 回答缺乏条理，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，说明记忆方法，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: I try to remember important things by paying attention, but sometimes I forget because I play with my friends too much. For example, once I forgot to bring a paper home that my mom needed to sign.

× Once Upon a time I was go to kindergarten like Grade 1.

✓ Once upon a time, I went to kindergarten, like Grade 1.

这里应该使用过去时态，表示过去发生的动作。'was go' 是错误的，正确形式是 'went'。

× Then teacher said remember to bring snow boots.

✓ Then the teacher said, 'Remember to bring snow boots.'

句子缺少冠词 'the' 和引号，且直接引语需要标点符号。

× Then I said I remember.

✓ Then I said I remembered.

这里需要使用过去时态 'remembered'，因为动作发生在过去。

× Absolutely, sometimes I will forgetting something important like today so teacher give me a paper but the paper need to give to my parent to sign but I forget to bring to the home so the paper is in the school in the binder.

✓ Absolutely, sometimes I forget something important like today. The teacher gave me a paper, but the paper needs to be given to my parents to sign. However, I forgot to bring it home, so the paper is still in the school binder.

句子结构混乱，时态不一致，动词形式错误。'will forgetting' 应为 'forget'，'teacher give' 应为 'teacher gave'，'need' 应为 'needs'，'forget to bring to the home' 应为 'forgot to bring it home'。需要分句使句子更清晰。

× I need a pencil case, 3 pencil 2 eraser and a protractor and a snow boots and a jacket because today is very cold today.

✓ I need a pencil case, 3 pencils, 2 erasers, a protractor, snow boots, and a jacket because today is very cold.

名词复数形式错误，'pencil' 应为 'pencils'，'eraser' 应为 'erasers'，'a snow boots' 应为 'snow boots'。

× Then I'm very smart, my binder is in the.

✓ Then I'm very smart; my binder is in the school.

句子不完整，缺少地点，且连接词使用不当。

× Then I forgetting important thing then I go home.

✓ Then I forget important things, then I go home.

'forgetting' 是动名词形式，句中应使用一般现在时 'forget'。

× Then my mom said what is the pay, where's the paper?

✓ Then my mom said, 'What is the paper? Where's the paper?'

句子缺少引号和标点，且 'pay' 应为 'paper'。

× Then I said oh I forget to bring it in the school tomorrow I must be give.

✓ Then I said, 'Oh, I forgot to bring it. Tomorrow I must give it.'

时态错误，'forget' 应为过去式 'forgot'，'must be give' 应为 'must give'。句子需要分开以表达清楚。