Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I still remember a kite that my father bought for me when I was six years old.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和动词形式错误。建议使用正确的时态和更连贯的表达方式。

例: Yes, I once forgot my phone during a trip to Dali two years ago. I left it in a coffee shop and realized it later.

提案: 句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I need to remember English words every day because I have been studying English recently. Remembering vocabulary is essential for my progress.

提案: 表达不够自然，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，并注意句子连贯性。

例: I use several methods to remember important things. For example, I write them in my notebook and review or say them aloud every day.

× Yes, the memories things I had is a kite which was bought by my father in my 6 years old.

✓ Yes, the memorable thing I had is a kite which was bought by my father when I was 6 years old.

这里'memories things'是复数和单数的错误搭配，应改为单数'memorable thing'。另外，'in my 6 years old'表达不正确，应改为'when I was 6 years old'。

× Yes, I forgotten something important is my phone.

✓ Yes, I forgot something important, which is my phone.

'forgotten'是过去分词，不能单独用作过去时态，应该用过去式'forgot'。

× It happens two years ago during my trip in Dali and I forgotten it in a coffee shop.

✓ It happened two years ago during my trip in Dali and I forgot it in a coffee shop.

'happens'应使用过去时'happened'，因为时间是过去的；'forgotten'应改为过去式'forgot'。

× I think the most important thing I need to do in my daily life is English words because I study English recently so English words is essential for me to remember.

✓ I think the most important thing I need to do in my daily life is to remember English words because I have been studying English recently, so English words are essential for me to remember.

'English words is'主谓不一致，应改为'English words are'。另外，'study English recently'时态不对，应使用现在完成进行时'have been studying'。

× I remember important thing by many of skills.

✓ I remember important things by many skills.

'important thing'应为复数形式'important things'，'many of skills'表达不正确，应改为'many skills'。

× For example, sometimes I will take it in my notebook or I also will read it or speak it every day.

✓ For example, sometimes I will write it in my notebook, or I will also read it or say it every day.

'take it in my notebook'表达错误，应改为'write it in my notebook'；'speak it'不合适，改为'say it'更自然。