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会話

Part 1

試験官

Are you good at memorising things?

受験者

No, to be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things because uh, I can forget many things uh, easily and I always make some mistakes. So in case of the situation, I will take some notes in advance to make sure I can remember them.

試験官

Have you ever forgotten something important?

受験者

Yes, definitely. I remember when I was a child, I forgot a necklace from my grandmother. This necklace was very important in my family because there was a special meaning for this necklace, but I lost it when I go.

試験官

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

受験者

During my previous internship, my mentor always asked me for several texts at the same time, so I had to remember all of them and completed them efficiently. It was a little bit difficult for me because I can forgot many things easily.

試験官

How do you remember important things?

受験者

I always take notes on my mobile phones to remember them, such as, uh, some tasks I have to do this week or some important things my family told to me. And in this way I can, uh, avoid many mistakes.

評価

総合

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

スコア: 70.0

提案: 回答中存在重复和填充词,如“uh”,影响流畅性。建议减少重复表达,使用更自然简洁的句子,并避免过多停顿词。

: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget easily. Therefore, I usually take notes beforehand to help me remember important information.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

スコア: 65.0

提案: 回答中语法错误较多,如“when I go”应为“when I was going”。建议注意时态和句子结构,表达更准确。

: Yes, I have. When I was a child, I lost a necklace from my grandmother that was very important to my family because it had special meaning.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

スコア: 60.0

提案: 回答中时态混用和语法错误影响表达,如“can forgot”应为“can forget”。建议注意时态一致性和语法正确性,同时内容应更贴近日常生活。

: In my daily life, I need to remember various tasks and deadlines, especially during my internship when my mentor assigned multiple tasks that I had to complete efficiently.

How do you remember important things?

スコア: 75.0

提案: 回答较为自然,但存在填充词“uh”,影响流畅性。建议减少停顿词,使用更连贯的表达。

: I usually take notes on my mobile phone to remember important tasks or things my family tells me. This method helps me avoid making mistakes.

文法

Past tense issue

× but I lost it when I go.

but I lost it when I went.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情,动词需要用过去式。'go'的过去式是'went',所以应改为'when I went'。

Past tense issue

× because I can forgot many things easily.

because I can forget many things easily.

情态动词'can'后面应接动词原形,不能用过去式'forgot',所以应改为'can forget'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× some important things my family told to me.

some important things my family told me.

动词'tell'后面直接接宾语,不需要介词'to',所以应去掉'to',改为'told me'。

重要語彙

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
LostMissing; Off course; Missed; Bygone; Extinct
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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