Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和表达方式。可以用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并适当补充细节。

例: I used to be good at memorising things when I was a child, but now I often forget what I need to do and where I put my phone.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少重复，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更连贯自然。

例: Yes, last month I forgot my best friend's birthday because I was very busy, and she lives abroad. I felt very upset and apologized to her.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复，明确表达需要记住的事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks related to study and work. I usually use a to-do list to keep track of my study tasks. Also, I remember important dates like anniversaries.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有些表达不够自然。建议改进句子结构，使表达更流畅自然，避免重复使用“remember”。

例: I usually use a to-do list to keep track of my study and work tasks. Additionally, I make sure to remember special days like anniversaries because they are meaningful to me.

× I, I think I really good at memory things, but today I think I don't good.

✓ I think I am really good at memorizing things, but today I think I am not good.

这里缺少动词be动词，形容词good前需要有am表示状态，且动词memorising应改为动名词memorizing。

× I I I didn't good at memory things.

✓ I was not good at memorizing things.

过去时态中，形容词前不能用didn't，应该用was not来表达过去状态。

× I always forgot what should I do?

✓ I always forget what I should do.

这里描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时forget，且疑问句语序应改为陈述句语序。

× And also forgot to where is my phone?

✓ And also forget where my phone is.

同样描述习惯动作，使用一般现在时forget，且疑问句语序应改为陈述句语序。

× Yeah, so now I don't good at memories.

✓ Yeah, so now I am not good at remembering things.

缺少be动词am，且memories应改为动名词remembering things。

× Yeah, just just when, when last month I remember I forgot, I forgot my best friend birthday because I'm really busy in the day and she she is abroad.

✓ Yeah, just last month I remembered I forgot my best friend's birthday because I was really busy that day and she was abroad.

过去时间点应使用过去时remembered和forgot，且表达过去状态用was，birthday前应加所有格best friend's。

× Yeah, I'm I'm so I'm so upset and I apologized to her.

✓ Yeah, I was so upset and I apologized to her.

描述过去情绪应使用过去时was。

× Sometimes I need to remember what should I do in the daily such as uh, such as study and work.

✓ Sometimes I need to remember what I should do daily, such as study and work.

疑问句语序应改为陈述句语序，daily作副词放在动词后。

× I usually need to uh, To Do List to remember, uh, study task.

✓ I usually need a to-do list to remember study tasks.

to-do list前应加冠词a，study task应为复数tasks。

× Also I need to remember, uh, anniversary day.

✓ Also, I need to remember anniversary days.

anniversary day应为复数形式anniversary days，表示多个纪念日。

× In my daily life, I need to remember where the important things such as my study and work tasks.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the important things such as my study and work tasks.

where用法错误，应去掉，直接说remember the important things。

× For example, I often use A to do list to keep track of assessments and guidelines.

✓ For example, I often use a to-do list to keep track of assessments and guidelines.

冠词A应小写a，且to-do list中间应有连字符。

× Also, I make sure to remember special days like anniversaries, which are meaningful to me.

✓ Also, I make sure to remember special days like anniversaries, which are meaningful to me.

该句语法正确，无需修改。