Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然和语法正确。开头直接给出主题句，然后用一到两句补充说明并使用连接词。可以纠正时态和词序，避免重复。比如将 "I really don't good at..." 改为 "I'm not good at..."，并说明你做什么来弥补（例如：making lists on my phone）。

例: I'm not very good at remembering things. So, to avoid forgetting, I make a checklist on my phone and tick items off as I go, which helps me stay organized.

提案: 内容不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。回答应先直接说有或没有，然后举一个具体例子并解释后果或应对方法。避免含糊表达（如 "some" 或 "change"），用明确名词并用连接词衔接句子。

例: Yes, I've forgotten important items before. For example, once I left my ID at home before a flight, so I had to return and missed the check-in time, which taught me to double-check my documents the night before traveling.

提案: 回答主题明确，但表达不够地道，部分词汇不准确（如 "rice station"）。应先给出总括句，再用具体细节说明，并使用连接词。把不准确的名词用更合适的词替换（如 "clinic" 或 "bank"），并说明如何提醒自己。

例: In daily life I need to remember medication times and appointments. For instance, I take medicine twice a day at 9am and 9pm, and I set alarms on my phone and calendar reminders for any appointments.

提案: 总体结构合理，有主题句和补充说明，但可以更简洁自然，并使用连接词使句子更通顺。避免重复（如同时说 "as I say" 和 "because"）。可以补充具体做法（如设置提醒、优先级），以显示细节。

例: Since I have a poor memory, I keep a to-do list on my phone and set alarms for urgent items. I also prioritize tasks and review the list every morning to make sure nothing is missed.

× No, I really don't good at memorizing things so I always bring all the things I need to do to make a list.

✓ No, I'm really not good at memorizing things, so I always make a list of all the things I need to bring.

句中“don't good”用法错误。形容词good不能直接与助动词do连用构成否定，正确结构是主语 + be + not + 形容词（如“I'm not good”）或用动词短语（如“don't remember well”）。另外原句逻辑混乱，修正为“make a list of all the things I need to bring”更符合英语表达习惯。建议：记住形容词需与be动词连用构成表语；表示带某物用bring，列清单用make a list of。

× Yes, of course, every time when I need to have a trip I always take a lot of baggage, but I usually will forget change something important like ID card or some.

✓ Yes, of course. Whenever I go on a trip I always take a lot of baggage, but I often forget something important like my ID card.

原句中时态和词序混乱，“every time when I need to have a trip”非地道表达，改为“Whenever I go on a trip”。“usually will forget change something”是错误的词语和时态混用，去掉多余词并用一般现在时表习惯性动作（I often forget）。另外“ID card or some”不完整，改为“my ID card”。建议：描述习惯性行为用一般现在时，避免多余词汇，使用完整名词短语。

× In my daily life, I usually need to remember what time I need to take some medicine and what time I need to bring something to the rice station.

✓ In my daily life, I usually need to remember what time I need to take my medicine and when I need to go to the train station to pick up things.

原句中“bring something to the rice station”中的介词和名词不当。“bring to”表示把东西带到某地，但语境应为去火车站拿东西或去某处，有可能是“train station”。“rice station”是错误词。还将“what time I need to bring something”改为更自然的“when I need to go to the train station to pick up things”。建议：确认地名或地点词汇，使用合适的介词短语（go to, pick up）。

× As I say, because of my poor memory, so I usually need to make a list to remember all the important things in my phone so that I can always check the list.

✓ As I said, because of my poor memory I usually make a list on my phone to remember all the important things so that I can always check it.

原句存在结构冗余和衔接词重复问题—“As I say”和“so”与“because”重复表达因果。改为“As I said”更符合过去提到的事实；删除不必要的“so”并调整词序，使用“make a list on my phone”更自然。建议：避免重复连词（because + so）；时态需与上下文一致（这里用过去式或现在完成根据语境，使用“As I said”可接受）。