Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 问题回答不够直接且语法错误较多。首先开头应直接回答问题，然后提供简洁具体的细节和原因。避免无关或错误的短语（如“terrible marriage”, “raising English words”, “bad at my mind”）。句子应更自然，用词更准确，并控制在最多五句内。建议用主题句+一两句说明+一例子，用连接词如“because”或“for example”保持连贯。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. I study English vocabulary every day, but I still forget many words because I don't review them regularly. For example, I learn ten new words each day, but without spaced repetition I often can't recall them a week later.

提案: 回答总体能传达意思，但句子可更自然并注意时态与搭配。开头直接肯定后，应用更地道的表达（例如“I promised a friend I would buy a birthday present”），用because或so连接原因，并可简要描述后果或感受，控制句数。

例: Yes, I have. I promised a friend that I would buy him a birthday present, but I had too much homework at the time, so I forgot. I felt really guilty and later apologised and gave him a small gift to make up for it.

提案: 回答含糊且有语法问题（如“Where there are too many things”不明）。应先给出主题句说明主要需要记住的内容，然后用具体例子（课程、考试日期、作业截止等）支持，并用连接词如“for example”和“also”。保持简洁明确。

例: I need to remember several types of information every day. For example, as a college student I must remember lecture content and key facts for exams. I also keep track of deadlines, class schedules and campus events so I don't miss anything important.

提案: 回答清晰并且实用，但语言可以更自然、精简并修正小错误（如“keep note”应为“take notes”或“keep notes”）。可补充具体方法名称（calendar, alarms, to-do apps）并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I use my mobile phone to remember important things. I take notes, set reminders or alarms and add events to my calendar. For urgent tasks I also set multiple alarms so I won't miss them.

× To be honest, I have to admit that I have a very terrible marriage.

✓ To be honest, I have to admit that I have a very terrible memory.

原句中使用了“marriage”（婚姻），與上下文（記憶力）不符，應為“memory”。這是詞彙選擇錯誤，屬於形容詞/副詞或詞語使用不當。建議注意語境，選擇與語境相關的名詞。

× For instance, when I'm learning English, I spend too much time every day on my raising English words.

✓ For instance, when I'm learning English, I spend too much time every day learning English words.

原句中“on my raising English words”結構不正確。動詞短語應用動名詞形式表達持續動作，且“raising words”不是正確表達。建議使用“spend ... doing”結構，即“spend time doing something”，並用“learning English words”。（用中文：應使用“spend ... doing”結構，並用與語境匹配的動名詞）

× But still, I often forget vocabularies, so I'm bad at my mind.

✓ But still, I often forget vocabulary, so I have a bad memory.

“vocabularies”通常不可數，正確說法是“vocabulary”。“I'm bad at my mind”是錯誤搭配，應用“have a bad memory”。這屬於量詞/名詞形式和搭配用法錯誤。建議學習常見不可數名詞和固定搭配（如“have a bad memory”）。

× I was promised my friend that I will buy him a present for his birthday, but unfortunately I happened to have too much homework and assignments to finish so I forgot to buy him a gift.

✓ I promised my friend that I would buy him a present for his birthday, but unfortunately I had too much homework and assignments to finish, so I forgot to buy him a gift.

原句中的時態和語態使用錯誤：“I was promised my friend”暗示被動且語義不清，應為主動“I promised”。此外，從句中應使用與過去時間一致的過去將來或過去式“would”，所以改為“I promised ... that I would”。“happened to have”可簡化為“had”。這屬於代詞/主語使用及時態一致問題（此處標為代詞類別因主被動與代詞指涉錯亂）。建議注意主動/被動之間的差別及過去時態中的時序一致。

× Where there are too many things.

✓ There are too many things to remember.

原句片段不完整且語序不自然。應用正確的“There be”結構並補全動詞短語以表達完整意思。屬於“There be”用法錯誤和句子不完整。建議練習完整句子結構，使用“There are ... to ...”來說明需記住的事情。

× For example, since I'm a college student, I need to remember my professional knowledge.

✓ For example, since I'm a college student, I need to remember my professional knowledge.

句子語法基本正確，但“remember my professional knowledge”搭配不太自然，通常說“remember what I learn for my major”或“remember professional knowledge related to my studies”。此處標為介詞使用類以提醒更自然的表達。建議改為更自然的搭配，如“remember the professional knowledge related to my studies”。

× Well, thanks to mobile phone, I now keep note on my phone every day.

✓ Well, thanks to my mobile phone, I now keep notes on my phone every day.

需要定冠詞或所有格“my”來明確指代“mobile phone”；“keep note”應為複數“keep notes”或短語“take notes”。此外，介詞應為“on my phone”。屬於冠詞/所有格與名詞單複數錯誤。建議使用“my mobile phone”並用“take notes”或“keep notes”。

× For example, if I have an emergency, I will make note set a reminder on my phone so that I will not forget it.

✓ For example, if I have an emergency, I will make a note or set a reminder on my phone so that I will not forget it.

原句“make note set a reminder”是兩個動作連接錯誤，且缺少冠詞“a”在“make a note”。應用“or”連接兩個選項。此為情態/助動詞及結構使用錯誤（在此標為情態動詞類因含未來式will的一致性），建議將動作分開並加上冠詞，使用“make a note or set a reminder”。