Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法和词汇错误较多，表达含糊。应直接用一句主题句回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，注意时态和单数/复数，使用连词如“so”或“because”连接原因。尽量控制在最多五句内。

例: Not really. I’m not very good at remembering things, so I often rely on apps and other people to help me. For example, I make notes on my phone and set reminders because it’s easy to forget tasks during a busy day.

提案: 答案有逻辑但表达模糊且有语法错误。应先直接回答，然后说明具体做法来避免忘记，使用连词如“although”或“because”，并给出一两个具体例子或结果。句子不要过长。

例: Not really. Although my memory is poor, I rarely forget important things because I plan ahead and double-check my schedule. For instance, I always confirm appointments the day before and set multiple reminders to make sure I won’t miss them.

提案: 回答不够明确、结构混乱、用词不当。应先说明日常需要记住的具体事项（如课业、作业、会议），然后说明如何记录和安排。使用连接词如“for example”或“such as”并保持句子简洁。

例: I need to remember things like assignments, class times and upcoming meetings. For example, I write down deadlines and plan my next day every evening so I can check the list again before leaving for work or school.

提案: 表达思路清晰但语法和词序错误较多，且重复啰嗦。应先总结方法（例如：I use to-do lists and phone reminders），然后用一两句具体说明操作步骤，使用连词如“then”或“so”。控制在三到四句内。

例: I usually make a to-do list and put it somewhere visible, such as on my desk. Then I set phone reminders for important tasks so I’ll get alerted at the right time and won’t forget to do them.

× No, I'm too I not good at memories things.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things.

原句中词序混乱并且单词形式错误："too I not" 顺序不对，应为 "I'm not"；"memories things" 中名词形式错误，应该使用动词-ing 形式或动名词 "memorising" 表示记忆的能力，且 "things" 可以保留或改为更具体的内容。建议简化句子结构，使用固定表达 "I'm not good at + -ing"。

× I always need some people or some apps to help me remember something.

✓ I always need people or apps to help me remember things.

原句中重复使用不必要的限定词 "some" 和不明确的单数 "something"。在一般陈述中用复数 "things" 更自然；"people or apps" 前不需要 "some"。建议使用更自然的量词或省略。

× For example I will make some noting to notice me if today I have something much to do.

✓ For example, I will make some notes to remind me if I have a lot to do today.

原句有多个问题："noting" 拼写错误，应为 "notes"（名词）；"to notice me" 用法不当，正确是 "to remind me"；"something much to do" 词序和用词错误，应为 "a lot to do" 或 "many things to do"。建议使用固定搭配 "make notes" 和 "remind me"。

× No, although I have a poor memory, I never forgot some important things because I will do lots of work to ensure I can do these things in the carry time.

✓ No, although I have a poor memory, I have never forgotten important things because I do a lot of work to ensure I can do them on time.

时态和用词错误：与现在有关的经验通常用现在完成时 "have never forgotten" 而不是过去式 "never forgot"；"some important things" 可简化为 "important things"；"will do lots of work" 与事实不符，改为一般现在时 "do a lot of work"；"in the carry time" 是错误表达，应为 "on time"（准时）。建议根据语境选择现在完成时表示经历或经验。

× Of course, during my study period that must degree period, I always maybe do some not and do some planning next days and when I go to my workplace I will check it again and do it at least.

✓ Of course, during my study period, especially during my degree, I often take notes and plan the next few days, and when I go to my workplace I check them again and at least do the most important tasks.

原句中量词和不确定词使用混乱："that must degree period" 语序和词语错误，应为 "especially during my degree"；"I always maybe do some not" 中 "not" 应为 "notes"，且 "always maybe" 自相矛盾，改为 "often"；"do some planning next days" 应为 "plan the next few days"；最后部分不完整，补为更自然的表达。建议使用明确的频率副词并保持句子一致。

× First I will make some to do lists and put it in a noticeable place.

✓ First, I will make some to-do lists and put them in a noticeable place.

问题包括复数一致和词形："to do lists" 应写作连字符形式 "to-do lists"（可接受为不连字符的写法但连字符更标准）；"it" 与复数 "lists" 不一致，改为复数代词 "them"。建议注意名词与代词的一致性。

× If I come to here I will see it and then maybe I will do some reminders on my phone so if I wake up maybe my phone can notice me today.

✓ If I come here I will see them, and I also set reminders on my phone so if I wake up my phone can remind me.

预positions 和动词选择错误："come to here" 应为 "come here"；代词一致问题 "see it" 改为 "see them"；"do some reminders" 用法不当，应为 "set reminders"；"phone can notice me" 不自然，正确是 "phone can remind me"。建议使用常见固定搭配如 "set reminders" 和 "remind someone"。

× Have these things I must to do and then.

✓ These are the things I must do.

原句结构混乱且有多余助动词 "to"："Have these things I must to do and then" 不符合英语语序，应整理为主语 + 谓语的完整句子，如 "These are the things I must do."。建议练习主语-谓语-宾语的基本语序，并避免不必要的助动词和翻译式表达。