Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够简洁且语法与用词有误。要直接给出主句表示是否擅长记忆，随后用1–2句具体说明改进方法或例子，注意时态和代词一致性，避免重复表达。可以使用连接词如 because / so / therefore 来增强连贯性。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. Because I used to forget appointments and items, I have learned memory techniques such as making lists and using mnemonic devices, and I'm practising them regularly to improve.

提案: 回答内容清楚但语言不够自然，有赘词和犹豫语（uh, I, I）。应直接叙述事件并补充具体后果或解决办法，使用连接词如 because / so 来理顺句子。注意冠词和短语（leave at home / leave it at home）。

例: Yes, once I arrived at the airport on time but realised I had left my passport at home, so I missed my flight and had to reschedule. That experience taught me to always check my travel documents the night before.

提案: 内容较好但用词和句子结构需更自然。避免使用连词重复（Because... so...）。把关键词具体化（what "daily static" means — e.g. sales figures, inventory）并用一两句说明如何处理这些信息以丰富回答。

例: As a manager, I need to remember daily figures such as sales, inventory levels and staff attendance. I check the numbers each morning and analyse trends so I can prepare concise reports for my boss.

提案: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误和不完整句子。直接给出方法并说明优缺点或习惯，使用连词如 sometimes / usually / because 增强逻辑。修正表达（write them in my notebook / type them on my phone / it's more convenient）。

例: It depends, but usually I write important tasks in a notebook or type them into a notes app on my phone because it's more convenient and searchable. For very important items I also set reminders to make sure I don't forget.

× Actually, I'm not good at that. Sometimes I used to forget something in the past, so I learned a lot about how to memorize things more deep, more deep.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at that. Sometimes I forget things, so I learned a lot about how to memorize things more deeply.

问题类型：现在时态/副词用法（ID 6/13）。原句中使用“used to forget”暗示过去习惯，但讲话意图是描述现在仍会发生的情况，应使用一般现在时“forget”。另外，“more deep”用作比较时应使用副词“more deeply”。建议：当描述经常或现在的习惯使用一般现在时；形容词修饰动词时应改为副词。

× And I'm applying to improve their skill.

✓ And I'm trying to improve my skills.

问题类型：代词使用错误（ID 12）。原句用“their”与说话人“I”不一致，应使用所有格“my”；动词短语“applying to improve”用法不当，改为常用表达“trying to improve”。建议：保证代词与主语一致，选择与语境匹配的动词短语。

× That was a really unforgettable experience. Uh, there was one time I got to the airport on time, but I forgot my passport. I, I think I, uh, left it in the home so that it's a really emergency situation.

✓ That was a really unforgettable experience. There was one time I arrived at the airport on time, but I had forgotten my passport. I think I had left it at home, so it was a really emergency situation.

问题类型：过去时态（ID 5）。描述过去发生且在另一过去时间点之前完成的动作，应使用过去完成时（had forgotten / had left）。“got to the airport”在此语境更自然的表达为“arrived at the airport”；“in the home”应为“at home”；“it's a really emergency situation”应与叙述过去时一致，改为“it was”。建议：叙述过去的连贯事件时，先发生的动作用过去完成时，地点用固定表达“at home”。

× Because my job is a manager, so I have to remember the daily static in every store.

✓ Because my job is as a manager, I have to remember the daily statistics in every store.

问题类型：量词/名词使用错误（ID 14）。“my job is a manager”通常说法是“my job is as a manager”或更自然“My job is manager”也可，此外“daily static”不是正确名词，应该是“daily statistics”。建议：职位表达可用“I'm a manager”或“my job is as a manager”；数据通常用“statistics”。

× I have to analyze them every day and make some reports for my boss.

✓ I have to analyze them every day and make some reports for my boss.

问题类型：无（句子语法正确）。这句语法正确，无需改动。提醒：注意“some reports”在正式场合也可以简化为“reports”。

× Wow, it depends. Sometimes I remember things by writing I will know them on my notebook, and sometimes I just type the things just straightly on my phone. It's a more convenient to remember than.

✓ Wow, it depends. Sometimes I remember things by writing them down in my notebook, and sometimes I just type them directly into my phone. It's a more convenient way to remember.

问题类型：代词使用/词序/副词位置（ID 12/20/13）。原句“writing I will know them on my notebook”词序混乱且代词缺失，应为“writing them down in my notebook”。“just straightly”不是地道表达，应为“directly”；“on my phone”改为介词“into”或“on”，此处“into”更符合“输入”的语境。最后一句不完整，改为“It’s a more convenient way to remember.” 建议：使用固定搭配“write something down”，“type something into (a device)”，副词位置通常在动词后或句末。