Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并控制句子长度，避免重复与语法错误。可以先给出明确的主题句（Yes/No + brief reason），然后用一到两句具体举例说明如何应对记忆困难。注意时态和单数/复数形式，去掉重复词汇（如重复的“test”）并用更自然的表达（e.g. "memorise vocabulary and grammar"）。

例: Not really. I find it hard to memorise things, so I use flashcards and spaced repetition apps to learn vocabulary and review grammar regularly.

提案: 回答应更简洁并按时间顺序清楚叙述事件。先给出肯定句然后补充细节（何时、什么、结果）。避免多余的填充词（uh）并注意语法（时态与主谓一致）。可以用一句话总结后用一句话说明后果或感受。

例: Yes. Once in high school I forgot to bring the tuition fee my father gave me; I left it in my desk and had to explain the situation to the school the next day.

提案: 回答要更有条理并使用准确词汇。先说明最重要的日常事项，然后列举一到两个具体例子。纠正词汇错误（e.g. "meals" 而不是 "males"），并把句子简化以避免重复。

例: I need to remember daily tasks for my pet, such as taking my dog for a walk and feeding him at regular times so he doesn't get hungry.

提案: 回答结构清晰但需更自然流畅。先用一句话概括方法，随后用一两个细节说明具体做法（例如设置提醒、颜色标记或优先级）。避免多余重复（"on it" 两次）并注意冠词与动词形式。

例: I use a notes app on my iPhone to record important plans and create to-do lists; I also set reminders and prioritise tasks so I don't forget anything important.

× No, I'm not a person good at memorizing things.

✓ No, I'm not a person who is good at memorizing things.

句子缺少关系代词和系动词，导致结构不完整。应在“person”和“good”之间加入“who is”以引导定语从句，完整表达“不是擅长记忆的人”。建议：使用关系代词who并加系动词is或简化为I'm not good at memorizing things。

× So for example, for preparing the IELTS test test, the most important things is that to memorize and record for the words and the vocabulary and the grammar.

✓ So, for example, when preparing for the IELTS test, the most important thing is to memorize and record the words, vocabulary, and grammar.

存在多处问题：重复单词“test test”；介词搭配错误（应为 preparing for）；“things”与后文谓语单数不一致，应为“thing”；不需要介词“for”在“record”后面；逗号和并列词使用需调整。建议：说“When preparing for the IELTS test”并使用单数“the most important thing is to ...”，列举时去掉多余冠词和重复。

× The most important things that I have forgotten in my life is that, uh, when I'm in the high school, my father gives me the tuition fee for the school and I forget to bring it to school and I put it in my desk.

✓ The most important thing I have forgotten in my life is when I was in high school: my father gave me the tuition fee, but I forgot to bring it to school and put it in my desk.

原句结构混乱：'things'与单数谓语不一致；时态不统一（事件发生在过去，应使用过去时）；'in the high school'用法不自然，应为'in high school'或'in secondary school'；重复并列连接过多。建议：将主语改为单数'the most important thing'，把描述事件改为过去时并用冒号或连词分开原因与结果。

× I need to remember in my daily life, life is to bring my dog to have a walk and give him the males in the right time because I think if I didn't feed him in a right ha right time, he'll feel hungry.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to take my dog for a walk and feed him at the right time because if I don't feed him at the right time, he'll feel hungry.

句子时态和表达混杂：主句应使用一般现在时表示习惯；'bring my dog to have a walk'应改为'take my dog for a walk'；'males'可能是'meals'拼写错误；'if I didn't feed him'与主句将来时不一致，应为条件句一般现在时（if I don't）与将来结果'll。建议：统一使用一般现在时描述日常习惯，修正固定搭配和拼写。

× I download the notebook application in my iPhone and if there are any important plans I will record it on it and to make A to do list to make sure I will do everything that are important.

✓ I downloaded the notebook application on my iPhone, and if there are any important plans I record them in it and make a to-do list to make sure I do everything that is important.

存在时态不一致（描述习惯或过去动作需判断；若说已下载应用应用过去时'downloaded'；随后动作表达习惯可用现在时）；介词错误'in my iPhone'应为'on my iPhone'；代词一致性错误('it'指代不清且'plans'为复数应用'them')；'to make A to do list'大小写与冠词错误，应为'a to-do list'；'everything that are important'中谓语与先行词不一致，应为'is important'。建议：确定时态（如果想表达习惯把'download'改为'have downloaded'或过去式），使用'on my iPhone'并保证代词单复数一致，简化句子结构为并列现在时。