Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并保持简洁，避免时态和语法错误，句子不宜过长。开头可直接回答并给出一两个具体原因或例子，使用连词自然衔接。如有比较，应用清晰的对比句式。注意主谓一致和代词用法。

例: Yes, I used to be good at memorising, especially in senior high school because I often learnt poems and vocabulary for Chinese and English exams. However, at university I now focus on memorising many Korean words, which is more challenging and requires different techniques.

提案: 回答应先直接肯定或否定，并用正确时态讲述具体事件的时间、地点和后果。避免不清楚或混乱的短语，保持句子简短并按时间顺序叙述。注意代词与名词呼应，使用正确动词形式。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam last semester. I missed the class because I mixed up the dates, so I went to the teacher's office afterwards to explain and ask for help. It was a stressful lesson about checking deadlines.

提案: 回答要更清晰地分层次表述学习和生活两方面的记忆任务，注意名词复数和所有格的正确使用。提供具体数字或例子，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: I need to remember many things every day. For my major, I try to learn about 100 Korean words daily to improve my vocabulary. In my personal life, I also remember important dates like my mother's and friends' birthdays so I can prepare gifts.

提案: 回答应更简洁并使用正确表达描述如何用手机提醒。避免重复词和不准确的词汇，使用具体操作步骤和连接词使逻辑清楚。注意日期和时间表达（例如 'last Saturday morning' 不适用于将来提醒）。

例: I usually use apps on my phone to remember important things. For example, I ask Siri to set a reminder or add an event to my calendar for a specific date and time, and my phone will alert me when it’s time.

× If you ask me these questions when I was in Senior High School, I would say yes because I was good at subjects such as Chinese and English and the often had to memorize poems and the vocabulary. However, since I entered university and majored in Korean translation, I have to remember a large number of Korean words.

✓ If you had asked me these questions when I was in senior high school, I would have said yes because I was good at subjects such as Chinese and English and often had to memorize poems and vocabulary. However, since I entered university and majored in Korean translation, I have had to remember a large number of Korean words.

错误类型：过去时态使用不当。说明：原句在条件从句和结果从句中所用时态不一致。第一句是对过去情况的假设，应使用过去完成时（If you had asked ...），结果句应使用 would have said。第二部分“the often had to”多余定冠词且“often had to”更自然。最后一句表示从过去到现在持续的动作，应用现在完成时（have had to）。建议：在虚拟语气的过去时间条件句中使用过去完成时；表达从过去持续到现在的动作用现在完成时；去掉多余的定冠词。

× If my memory service relied, it happened on last semester's final exam week and I forget one important class is that I It was impressive for me because after that I come to teachers office to ask him to open the kennel for me.

✓ My memory failed last semester during final exam week. I forgot an important class, which impressed me because after that I went to my teacher's office to ask him to open the kennel for me.

错误类型：句子结构错误（含时态和代词错误）。说明：原句结构混乱，时态不一致（happened 与 forget混用），动词形式不正确（forget应为forgot），并且有多余或错误的词（service relied、I It）。建议：将句子拆分为清晰的两句，统一使用过去时（failed, forgot, impressed, went），修正所有多余或拼写错误。注意所有名词短语的所有格（teacher's office）。

× For majors, I need to remember about 100 Korean words in a day and in the daily life affairs I need to remember my mother friend's birthday date so I can prepare birthday gift for them.

✓ For my major, I need to remember about 100 Korean words a day, and in daily life I need to remember my mother's and my friends' birthdays so I can prepare birthday gifts for them.

错误类型：动词的-ing形式/名词短语使用不当，以及所有格和复数问题。说明：'For majors'应为'For my major'或'class'；'in the daily life affairs'表达笨拙，改为'in daily life'；'my mother friend's birthday date'应为'my mother's and my friends' birthdays'以表达多个人的生日；'a birthday gift'改为复数以对应复数对象。建议：注意所有格的使用（mother's, friends'），简化固定搭配（a day, in daily life），并保持单复数一致。

× I always choose to use the apps in my phone. It's a good reminder for me when I ask, hi Siri, please, Please remember me at the last Saturday morning and the survey will put the affair in the calendar. At that time my phone will ring so I will remember the important things.

✓ I always use apps on my phone. It's a good reminder for me when I say, "Hey Siri, please remind me next Saturday morning," and the service will put the event in the calendar. At that time my phone will ring, so I will remember important things.

错误类型：情态动词/请求表达和时间短语使用不当。说明：'choose to use the apps in my phone'冗长，改为'use apps on my phone'；向语音助手发出请求应使用'please remind me'而不是'imperative + remember me'，且时间短语应为'next Saturday morning'而非'the last Saturday morning'；'survey'误用，应为'service'或'assistant'；'the affair'改为'the event'或'the reminder'。建议：使用正确的祈使句结构向语音助手发出请求，注意时间词的选择（next/this/last），以及使用合适的名词（service, event）。

× I forgot an important class, which impressed me because after that I went to my teacher's office to ask him to open the kennel for me.

✓ I forgot an important class, which was upsetting because after that I went to my teacher's office to ask him to open the kennel for me.

错误类型：代词使用不当。说明：原句中'which impressed me'语义不合——忘课通常不会用'impress'描述感受，应该用'was upsetting'、'was embarrassing'或'worried me'等。建议：根据语境选择合适的形容词或短语表达情感，避免机械套用常见搭配。