Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答比较直接但存在语法和表达不自然的问题，应改进句子结构并用更自然的表达方式说明记忆能力，同时避免重复和冗余。可以用一两句说明方法或场景来具体化陈述。

例: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising. For instance, when I study vocabulary I can retain about 200 words a day by using spaced repetition and frequent review, which helps me remember long-term.

提案: 回答内容清楚但句子时态和连贯性可改进，应使用更自然的时态和连接词，并可补充感受或后果使回答更具体。

例: Yes, once during a trip I realised I had forgotten my phone charger right after arriving. It was inconvenient because I had to buy a new one, and I felt frustrated since it cost me extra time and money.

提案: 回答主题明确，但有用词错误（如“manage my tax”可能不符合语境）和表达可更精炼。建议替换不当词汇并给出具体例子说明日程如何安排。

例: The most important thing I remember every day is my schedule. I follow a fixed timetable so I can balance classes, study sessions and rest — for example, I allocate mornings to lectures, afternoons to assignments, and evenings for relaxation.

提案: 回答意思明确但用词不自然（如“memorandum”、“notice me”），句子结构也略啰嗦。建议使用更自然的表达并具体说明使用的工具或方法，以及示例流程。

例: I usually write important tasks in a notes app and set reminders in my digital calendar. For example, I create an event with an alert 30 minutes before, and I also make a short to‑do list each morning to keep track of priorities.

× I think I'm good at memory things.

✓ I think I'm good at memorising things.

原句中“good at memory things”是不地道的表达。英语中通常用动名词短语“good at + verb-ing”来表示擅长某事，或用短语“good at memory”也不常见。改为“I’m good at memorising things”（我擅长记忆事物）更自然。建议记住常用结构：good at + 动名词。

× When I just arrived at my destination I found I forgot to bring my charger so I needed to buy a new one.

✓ When I had just arrived at my destination, I found that I had forgotten to bring my charger, so I needed to buy a new one.

句子涉及到两个过去动作：先到达（past perfect 用于更早的过去动作的陈述），随后发现忘记带充电器。原句中时态混用（found I forgot）不准确，应使用过去完成时表示更早发生的动作，即“had forgotten”。同时在“found that”后加从属连词更完整。中文说明：这里需要区分过去动作的先后顺序，先发生的用过去完成时（had + 过去分词）。

× I can remember around 200 words a day, so I think I'm good at memory things.

✓ I can remember around 200 words a day, so I think I have a good memory.

原句第二部分“good at memory things”结构不当。应改为“have a good memory”来表示“记忆力好”。同时保留第一部分“remember around 200 words a day”。中文说明：用法上要注意用名词短语“have a good memory”而不是“good at memory things”。

× I always write my important things in my memorandum so that I will not forget it and my calendar will notice me at that time.

✓ I always write my important things in my memorandum so that I will not forget them and my calendar will remind me at the right time.

原句存在代词数的一致问题（it 应为 them）以及用词不当：calendar 不会“notice me”，更常用“remind me”；“at that time”改为“at the right time”更自然。中文说明：注意代词与复数名词保持一致，选择恰当动词（remind 而不是 notice），以及自然的时间表达。

× I stick to a fixed daily timetable because it helps me manage my tax efficiently, finish my school work on time and get enough sleep.

✓ I stick to a fixed daily timetable because it helps me manage my tasks efficiently, finish my schoolwork on time, and get enough sleep.

原句中“manage my tax”用词错误，应为“manage my tasks”（管理任务/事务）；“school work”通常合成词为“schoolwork”。中文说明：注意选择正确的名词（tasks 而非 tax）并使用正确拼写与合成词。

× For example, I can remember around 200 words a day, so I think I'm good at memory things.

✓ For example, I can remember around 200 words a day, so I think I have a good memory.

虽然不是典型的there be 错误，但原句表达“我记忆力好”应用存在结构问题，合并替换为“have a good memory”更自然。中文说明：在表示“有……的能力/特质”时，用“have a good + 名词”更常见。

× I always write my important things in my memorandum so that I will not forget it and my calendar will notice me at that time. Thanks for the digital phones.

✓ I always write my important things in my memorandum so that I will not forget them and my calendar will remind me at the right time. Thanks to digital phones.

短语“Thanks for the digital phones” 用法不当，应为“Thanks to digital phones”表示“多亏了电子手机”。中文说明：固定搭配“thanks to + 原因”表示“多亏”，而“thanks for”用于感谢某人或某物（通常跟动词-ing 或名词）。