Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сформулируйте ответ более естественно и кратко: начните с чёткой темы (Yes/No), затем кратко поясните причину и приведите одно конкретное следствие или пример. Избегайте повторов, лишних слов и грамматических ошибок. Используйте такие связки как "because" или "so" для логики высказывания.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I have a poor memory, so I often avoid reading long books these days.

提案: Дайте чёткий ответ и затем расскажите один конкретный случай подробно и логично. Уберите паузы и колебания, используйте правильные времена (past simple) и связки (for example, one time, so). Постарайтесь описать событие в 2–3 предложениях с ясной последовательностью.

例: Yes. For example, when I was a child I once went to school and realised I had forgotten to wear my school skirt. I felt embarrassed and learned to check my clothes before leaving.

提案: Структурируйте ответ: начните с общего утверждения, затем перечислите 2–3 важные вещи с использованием связок (such as, for example, also). Избегайте тавтологии и неверных фраз ("take my passport in everyday life" — звучит неестественно).

例: I need to remember several essential things every day. For example, I always check that I have my wallet with cash and cards, my ID or passport when travelling, and the address of where I live.

提案: Дайте полноценный ответ: начните с фразы-тезиса о методе запоминания, затем объясните, как вы это делаете, и приведите конкретный пример. Избегайте одного слова или незавершённых фраз. Используйте слова-связки (so, therefore, for example) и простые описательные детали.

例: I use a few techniques to remember important things. For example, I set reminders on my phone and write notes in a diary, so I don't forget appointments or documents.

× No, I think it's no because I have a bad memory and I think that because of that I don't read the books in recent years and don't study it well.

✓ No, I don't think so because I have a bad memory, and because of that I haven't been reading books in recent years and haven't been studying well.

The sentence uses tense inconsistently. 'I think it's no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so'. 'In recent years' requires present perfect continuous or present perfect to show an action from past to now: 'haven't been reading' or 'haven't read'. Also 'don't study it well' has unclear object and mismatched tense; use 'haven't been studying well'. Combine clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, of course I when I was a child, I often forget something important.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I often forgot important things.

This sentence mixes past time marker 'when I was a child' with present simple 'forget'. Use past simple 'forgot' for repeated actions in the past. Also 'something important' is better as plural 'important things' for repeated occurrences. Add punctuation for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I remember that one day and when I go to school, I forgot to, uh, wear my skirt.

✓ I remember that one day when I went to school, I forgot to wear my skirt.

Sequence of events in the past requires past simple: 'went' not 'go'. Remove filler 'uh' and misplaced comma. 'Forgot to wear my skirt' correctly expresses the past action. Keep past tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× In my daily life I must I need to remember, take my passport in everyday life, take my cash, credit card and also need to remember where I live.

✓ In my daily life I must remember to take my passport, cash and credit card, and also remember my address.

The original repeats modal expressions ('must I need') and has awkward word order. Use single modal 'must' or phrase 'need to' not both. 'Take my passport in everyday life' is ungrammatical; use 'remember to take my passport'. 'Where I live' is better as 'my address' in this context. Simplify list with commas. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× Uh, I try to frequently.

✓ I try to do it frequently.

'Try to' should be followed by the base verb (infinitive) not an adverb alone. The original lacks an object: 'do it' or 'use reminders' clarifies meaning. Move adverb 'frequently' after the verb phrase. Alternatively, 'I try frequently' is acceptable but still needs an object for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 8